Paula Swanson Poet Rondeau

Heated Kisses

Heated kisses,
fevered touch upon my waking.
Heated kisses,
entreating a sweet hypnosis.
Sultry promises you're making,
deep of your lips I am drinking.
Heated kisses.


Paula Swanson
For the contest Rondelet
Sponsored by Dr. Ram
Form:  Rondolet
Placement: 6th

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Kash Poet August 1, 2011 at 1:34 PM Very passionate write here Paula...congratulations on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown August 1, 2011 at 11:08 AM Congratulations on your poem placing in Dr. Ram Mehta's " Rondelet" contest Paula. Love, Carol

Sharon Well August 1, 2011 at 9:27 AM Great poem! Hearty congratulations on your win, Paula! Sharon.

David Williams August 1, 2011 at 8:41 AM hey Paula, congrats on your win, David

Joyce Johnson July 31, 2011 at 8:50 PM Lovely romantic piece. Congratulations and thanks for your comments. Love, Joyce

John Freeman July 31, 2011 at 8:26 PM Paula, great to see your poem honored in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Jun-Jun Villanueva July 31, 2011 at 6:31 PM CONGRATULATIONS~~~~smile for the win~~~*-*junjun

Carolyn Devonshire July 31, 2011 at 5:12 PM Ah, I know what you mean about the hypnotic quality of heated kisses. A few glasses of wine and I feel the passion too, Paula. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 31, 2011 at 5:10 PM Congrats Paula on your magnificent win with another glorious poetic art masterpiece my friend... enjoy with luv.. I have no access to my member page since last night..oh..

Jack Horne July 31, 2011 at 4:00 PM Many congrats, Paula : )

Andrea Dietrich July 31, 2011 at 3:55 PM wow, what a sexy way to do the contest. I like this one a lot and congratulations, Paula.

Caryl Ramsdale July 31, 2011 at 2:27 PM A Ronelet Contest Congratulations! Caryl

Dr.Ram Mehta July 31, 2011 at 2:08 PM My congratulations on this win in my contest, Paula

Dr.Ram Mehta July 29, 2011 at 1:32 PM Thanks for the entry, Paula

Francine Roberts July 21, 2011 at 10:23 PM line 6 should the you be your ( and line 5 should the your be you're, or not) , just in case Paula Swanson July 22, 2011 at 7:45 AM Thank you Francine. I know better than that. I claim the blame on pure exhaustion.

Olivia Nicole July 21, 2011 at 7:17 PM I really captured an image of kissing . But with high intensity. The way this poem was written was brilliant :)