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Heated Kisses

Heated kisses, fevered touch upon my waking. Heated kisses, entreating a sweet hypnosis. Sultry promises you're making, deep of your lips I am drinking. Heated kisses.
Paula Swanson For the contest Rondelet Sponsored by Dr. Ram Form: Rondolet Placement: 6th

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/1/2011 1:34:00 PM
Very passionate write here Paula...congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/1/2011 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem placing in Dr. Ram Mehta's " Rondelet" contest Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2011 9:27:00 AM
Great poem! Hearty congratulations on your win, Paula! Sharon.
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Date: 8/1/2011 8:41:00 AM
hey Paula, congrats on your win, David
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Date: 7/31/2011 8:50:00 PM
Lovely romantic piece. Congratulations and thanks for your comments. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/31/2011 8:26:00 PM
Paula, great to see your poem honored in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/31/2011 6:31:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS~~~~smile for the win~~~*-*junjun
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Date: 7/31/2011 5:12:00 PM
Ah, I know what you mean about the hypnotic quality of heated kisses. A few glasses of wine and I feel the passion too, Paula. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/31/2011 5:10:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your magnificent win with another glorious poetic art masterpiece my friend... enjoy with luv.. I have no access to my member page since last night..oh..
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Date: 7/31/2011 4:00:00 PM
Many congrats, Paula : )
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Date: 7/31/2011 3:55:00 PM
wow, what a sexy way to do the contest. I like this one a lot and congratulations, Paula.
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Date: 7/31/2011 2:27:00 PM
A Ronelet Contest Congratulations! Caryl
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Date: 7/31/2011 2:08:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in my contest, Paula
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Date: 7/29/2011 1:32:00 PM
Thanks for the entry, Paula
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Date: 7/21/2011 10:23:00 PM
line 6 should the you be your ( and line 5 should the your be you're, or not) , just in case
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Paula Swanson
Date: 7/22/2011 7:45:00 AM
Thank you Francine. I know better than that. I claim the blame on pure exhaustion.
Date: 7/21/2011 7:17:00 PM
I really captured an image of kissing . But with high intensity. The way this poem was written was brilliant :)
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