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Heartlessness

A man so evil, his eyes are those of snakes. His presence makes the occupants fill with rage, But only to fear. Lots of fear. His way is of the coyote, so sly with his pray. My heart's desire may compel me; but I too also doubt. God listen closely as I pray, for this just might be my last day. I want to fly like a butterfly, with grace and peace. I want prosperity, for this is my golden age. An angel, I imagine is my desire; For my life truly is horrid. His heart is as cold as the dark side of the moon; His fists are clenched with rage. His voice carries though the skies, For god himself can hear his screams. The earth rumbles with him in tune to his shrieks. A single tear on the face of the cosmos, Falls into a eternal blackness. A butterfly flies so graceful. A smile on gods face would only prevail. The stem of a feather from an angel's wings, Resembles my heart. No force on earth nor hell can compel. I speak now with the end of days. My demise. A unknown force drives these emotions. Not god, not satin, Nor any being explain the sensation. An old life must die, for a new to be reborn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/21/2010 3:07:00 PM
So full of passion. Perhaps you would do well to try to write in form..pick one and try to fit you words that are just tumbling out into perhaps a choka ..Look at th contest and write something for one of them. I am so glad you are here on the soup..I think you have talent. BG
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Date: 11/21/2010 2:59:00 PM
Please post a comment!!!!!!!!
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Date: 11/21/2010 2:58:00 PM
Wonderful poem.
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Date: 11/15/2010 6:57:00 PM
strong words... you have passion in your words.
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Date: 11/15/2010 8:46:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Tayler. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2010 8:25:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry today with its creative theme... hope your time on Soup will be special and fun... check out the contests offered to members ..good luck with luv..
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Date: 11/14/2010 7:30:00 PM
strong and deep write, enjoyed this one,..P.D.
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Date: 11/13/2010 7:52:00 PM
Wow! I don't know much about poetry, but that was a powerful and interesting - shaker of a read!
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