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Through my window, I see your silhouette in moonlight, on the far hill, each night as you sit alone We were lovers once You live on the cobbled road, where the stone gates are And I, above the store where father makes shoes I still wear the scars from those days We were young, I found you innocent and fragile, you opened your heart That summer was alive and fragrant, we picked wildflowers, putting them in our hair and covered every meadow, swam naked in your father's stream, below the hill, where the stone seat is, under the elm tree I felt out of place, yet you welcomed me It rained the last time I saw you The sadness in your face, the silent tears, as each stroke from your father's whip, cut deep, deep in my back Over the years they've healed, tattoo reminders Every night I look out, see your silhouette on the hill, sitting alone in the moonlight And I, a face in a broken window 7/13/14

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Date: 9/9/2021 11:43:00 AM
Great imagery of love and serene yes so sad at the end. Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest, Frederic.
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Date: 9/8/2021 9:48:00 PM
Frederic, congratulations on your win in my "H" Contest, New or Old with your poem ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 7/29/2014 6:19:00 PM
Frederic, awesome free verse poem...Linda
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Date: 7/21/2014 8:59:00 PM
Gosh, Frederic, this is somewhere out there in wonderful. Just love it. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/21/2014 2:35:00 AM
Great win..congrats
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Date: 7/20/2014 11:47:00 PM
Intense feelings ,, n an awesome write Frederic! Touched my heart,, Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 7/20/2014 4:39:00 PM
Am blown away with this incredible write Frederic - truly outstanding! Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 7/20/2014 12:12:00 PM
Frederic, be this fact or fiction it carries the import of the forbidden loves, separated by caste, color, or ignorance. Well deserved placement in the contest.
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Date: 7/20/2014 12:45:00 AM
you always amaze me with poetry on longings, frederick..a well-placed, high win with my congrats and hugggs
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/20/2014 9:44:00 AM
Yes that seems to be the heart of much of my poetry, thank you for noticing And thank you my poetic friend for your kindness
Date: 7/19/2014 9:40:00 PM
Oh! Wow! Frederic!.. Magnificent my poetic friend!..... Just read it again and... Just freakin awesome!... Congrats on a great win.. Hugs... Arlene
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/20/2014 9:45:00 AM
thank you Arlene my friend for reading and for your kindness
Date: 7/19/2014 9:18:00 PM
OMG, BEST poem of yours I think I ever saw!!! You created a masterpiece with this one. the way you ended it , to go along with the way it started, gosh, I want the guy to just get up and go to her in the moonlight. surely the old mean dad is dead by now!!! Best poem I read all day. FAVE!!! and congrats on your very well deserved win.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/20/2014 9:53:00 AM
OK my poetic friend, your opening line seems a little over the top, I do enjoy it though..best ever ..huh..thank you ...I think..and yes a follow up poem with her dad dying and the guy rushing to her side only to find out she met someone..so he's doomed to stay in a small room alone the rest of his life repairing shoes or maybe walks into a near by forest never to be seen again Thank you my friend " truly" for all your help and kindness
Date: 7/19/2014 5:03:00 PM
Such essence Frederic... Congratulations on your fine win... Verlena
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/19/2014 5:19:00 PM
thank you Verlena for your kindness
Date: 7/19/2014 4:24:00 PM
Way to go ....Congrats..Sara
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/19/2014 5:19:00 PM
thank you Sara for your kindness
Date: 7/19/2014 4:09:00 PM
I always think of you as a master of the sonnet, but here you've shown that you're equally adept at a free verse! it's a very haunting piece and, as nette says below, it stays with the reader long after - congrats on your win in my contest!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/19/2014 5:21:00 PM
thank you Charlotte for the placement in your contest and thank you for your kindness
Date: 7/17/2014 6:17:00 AM
radiant in its content and choice of words... the languid mood pervades long after a read, Frederic.. my choice!.. huggs
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/19/2014 5:22:00 PM
congratulations on your first place win with your entry my friend, well deserved
Date: 7/15/2014 8:35:00 AM
- Sad memories of time back - fantastic written, Frederic ! - Luck in contest - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/19/2014 5:23:00 PM
thank you gentle Anne for your kindness
Date: 7/13/2014 9:34:00 PM
Well done...I really admire the ending. reminds me of my youth in a way..except for the whipping. Now that's terrible. BG
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/19/2014 5:24:00 PM
I hope there wasn't any whips or chains..thank you my poetic friend for your kindness
Date: 7/13/2014 8:16:00 PM
majestic ... ahhh to be loved so Light & Love
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/19/2014 5:25:00 PM
thank you Debbie for reading and for your kindness
Date: 7/13/2014 7:54:00 PM
the biggest loves are unfinished,that you still dram of and wait to happen ,yet deep down in your heart you know it's never gonna be, thank you for sharing your great poem with us,Ivy
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/19/2014 5:26:00 PM
thank you Ivy for your kindness
Date: 7/13/2014 7:07:00 PM
This is wonderful Frederic...I like the twist with the whipping.....Tim
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/19/2014 5:27:00 PM
thank you Tim for your kindness

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