Heartbroken

Through my window, I see your silhouette in moonlight,
on the far hill, each night as you sit alone
We were lovers once
You live on the cobbled road, where the stone gates are
And I, above the store where father makes shoes
I still wear the scars from those days
We were young, I found you innocent and fragile,
you opened your heart
That summer was alive and fragrant,
we picked wildflowers, putting them in our hair
and covered every meadow, swam naked in your father's stream,
below the hill, where the stone seat is, under the elm tree
I felt out of place, yet you welcomed me
It rained the last time I saw you
The sadness in your face, the silent tears,
as each stroke from your father's whip,
cut deep, deep in my back
Over the years they've healed, tattoo reminders
Every night I look out, see your silhouette on the hill,
sitting alone in the moonlight
And I, a face in a broken window



7/13/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Roper Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 11:43 AM
Great imagery of love and serene yes so sad at the end. Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest, Frederic.
La France Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 9:48 PM
Frederic, congratulations on your win in my "H" Contest, New or Old with your poem ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
A   Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 6:19 PM
Frederic, awesome free verse poem...Linda
Gibson Avatar
July 21, 2014 at 8:59 PM
Gosh, Frederic, this is somewhere out there in wonderful. Just love it. Congratulations.
Khan Avatar
July 21, 2014 at 2:35 AM
Great win..congrats
A. Sharma Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 11:47 PM
Intense feelings ,, n an awesome write Frederic! Touched my heart,, Congrats on huge win!
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 4:39 PM
Am blown away with this incredible write Frederic - truly outstanding! Hugs jan xxx
Lawless Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 12:12 PM
Frederic, be this fact or fiction it carries the import of the forbidden loves, separated by caste, color, or ignorance. Well deserved placement in the contest.
Onclaud Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 12:45 AM
you always amaze me with poetry on longings, frederick..a well-placed, high win with my congrats and hugggs
Parker Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 9:44 AM
Yes that seems to be the heart of much of my poetry, thank you for noticing And thank you my poetic friend for your kindness
Smith Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 9:40 PM
Oh! Wow! Frederic!.. Magnificent my poetic friend!..... Just read it again and... Just freakin awesome!... Congrats on a great win.. Hugs... Arlene
Parker Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 9:45 AM
thank you Arlene my friend for reading and for your kindness
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 9:18 PM
OMG, BEST poem of yours I think I ever saw!!! You created a masterpiece with this one. the way you ended it , to go along with the way it started, gosh, I want the guy to just get up and go to her in the moonlight. surely the old mean dad is dead by now!!! Best poem I read all day. FAVE!!! and congrats on your very well deserved win.
Parker Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 9:53 AM
OK my poetic friend, your opening line seems a little over the top, I do enjoy it though..best ever ..huh..thank you ...I think..and yes a follow up poem with her dad dying and the guy rushing to her side only to find out she met someone..so he's doomed to stay in a small room alone the rest of his life repairing shoes or maybe walks into a near by forest never to be seen again Thank you my friend " truly" for all your help and kindness
Walker  Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 5:03 PM
Such essence Frederic... Congratulations on your fine win... Verlena
Parker Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 5:19 PM
thank you Verlena for your kindness
Kendrick Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 4:24 PM
Way to go ....Congrats..Sara
Parker Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 5:19 PM
thank you Sara for your kindness
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July 19, 2014 at 4:09 PM
I always think of you as a master of the sonnet, but here you've shown that you're equally adept at a free verse! it's a very haunting piece and, as nette says below, it stays with the reader long after - congrats on your win in my contest!
Parker Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 5:21 PM
thank you Charlotte for the placement in your contest and thank you for your kindness
Onclaud Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 6:17 AM
radiant in its content and choice of words... the languid mood pervades long after a read, Frederic.. my choice!.. huggs
Parker Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 5:22 PM
congratulations on your first place win with your entry my friend, well deserved
Andresen Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 8:35 AM
- Sad memories of time back - fantastic written, Frederic ! - Luck in contest - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Parker Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 5:23 PM
thank you gentle Anne for your kindness
Gorelick Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 9:34 PM
Well done...I really admire the ending. reminds me of my youth in a way..except for the whipping. Now that's terrible. BG
Parker Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 5:24 PM
I hope there wasn't any whips or chains..thank you my poetic friend for your kindness
Guzzi Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 8:16 PM
majestic ... ahhh to be loved so Light & Love
Parker Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 5:25 PM
thank you Debbie for reading and for your kindness
Vresk Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 7:54 PM
the biggest loves are unfinished,that you still dram of and wait to happen ,yet deep down in your heart you know it's never gonna be, thank you for sharing your great poem with us,Ivy
Parker Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 5:26 PM
thank you Ivy for your kindness
Smith Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 7:07 PM
This is wonderful Frederic...I like the twist with the whipping.....Tim
Parker Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 5:27 PM
thank you Tim for your kindness
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