Heartbroken

Roses Come with their thorns, Love comes with thorns as well Leaving so many heartbroken Emotions then run over into tears As thorns of heartbreak pierce the heart, Something so beautiful Can cause such pain, Roses

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/9/2024 7:57:00 AM

The form name caught my eye, so I am checking it out. Seems like I remember writing one of these a long time ago. I need to check it out again. Thanks for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2023 3:47:00 PM

What. Great rictometer. Belated congrats on your win

Constance La France

Date: 10/20/2023 1:08:00 PM

Joseph, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my contest, Constance

Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/15/2023 8:54:00 PM

Congrats to win on your lovely poem. I admire. Have Great Days. Blessings

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/12/2023 2:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A creative write with roses/pain. "I Love It" Have a blessed day writing away......................

Charles Messina

Date: 10/7/2023 5:59:00 PM

Love hurts, my friend. Nicely penned, Joseph.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/6/2023 6:33:00 PM

It makes you wonder, how can "something so beautiful, cause such pain.?" Your thoughts hold so much truth about love and thorns. Tender emotions bleed through your words, Joseph. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy