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Heartbroken

The most profound depth of her desire faded and died without notice or warning leaving me a heartbroken cold footnote on the final page of our love the word goodbye was never spoken, only implied by her silence bursting my heart like a bubble drifting on the wind dripping pain from its last moment of existence on my soul that's now a hermit trapped in the rags of yesterday lost in the desert of loneliness beneath a black sky without stars where a shadowed solitude washes my face in the timeless sand of my windblown footprints leading to nowhere, carrying pictures of her as they appear in my mind's lost dreams where I collapse with my head tilted against my heart's broken wall crying in silence over a world that's gone forever I stretch my empty pained heart towards the unknown in hopes of grasping a lingering light to heal my heartbroken soul 2/25/23 contest Writing Challenge-H-words sponsor Constance La France Heartbroken

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Date: 3/2/2023 12:38:00 AM
Frederic, a lovely poem and I love the music, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - H Words, well done, blessings, Constance
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Date: 2/28/2023 4:20:00 PM
Sad though beautiful and moving to Frederic. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Date: 2/28/2023 9:58:00 AM
- A deeply moving poem, Fredric :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 2/25/2023 6:28:00 PM
This is so sad and deep Frederic, love can wound us like no other, well written, I hope its fiction, cuz if its not it would break my heart :(
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/25/2023 6:37:00 PM
the visual is fiction, the emotion is from long ago, dear poet
Date: 2/25/2023 11:59:00 AM
Beautifully haunting and passionate piece, Frederic, especially with the accompanying song. One to come back to, for sure, therefore, a fave for me.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/25/2023 1:45:00 PM
thank you "Hello There " for your kind words and your fave

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