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She was thinking of locking the door to that room, and never going in there again. And yet, she enters; despite her misgivings, as tears trickled down her cheeks. Suddenly, she's overwhelmed by happy thoughts; that have attached themselves to that room in perpetuity and taken refuge in her memories. The air smells of fresh paint and clean linen; and she smiles at the pink carnations painted on the wall, as her trembling fingers lightly trace over them. She put so much of herself into planning every detail of that room, and it shows. The hand-carved crib, a gift from her father, was a bed fit for a princess, due to arrive soon. Her mother helped her decorate the nursery; it was her idea to paint the flowers pink for a girl. Taking one last look, she slowly shuts the door; heartbroken and depressed. There's no longer any hope left in that room. Last week, she suffered a miscarriage; and nothing in that room could help ease her hurt; all she found there were tears.

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Date: 6/11/2024 6:38:00 PM
Dear Emile, such poignant beauty spills from your soulful pen. I felt her heartache more and more with every vivid yet tender verse. Your last line truly brings the heartbreak home. Congratulations for your win in Craig's contest. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/12/2024 7:40:00 AM
Thanks, Susan. Your words honor me, my friend, and I appreciate all you have to say, Emile.
Date: 9/9/2021 6:00:00 AM
Back with congrats! Apropos
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Date: 9/9/2021 7:17:00 AM
Thanks, Kim, as always I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/9/2021 1:25:00 AM
Hopelessness and pessimism seem to take their due places. Natural in such situations. Indeed, a beautiful poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/9/2021 7:16:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/8/2021 9:26:00 PM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my "H" Contest, New or Old with your beautiful poem ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 9/9/2021 7:16:00 AM
Thanks, Constance, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/7/2021 9:22:00 AM
Emile, this is poignant and sad and sometimes so many mothers go through at some time in their life. Your imagery was so fine it brought tears to my eyes, seriously.
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Date: 9/7/2021 10:27:00 AM
Thanks, Milt, you honor me, and I appreciate all you have to say my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/7/2021 6:45:00 AM
She put much thought into her hope, her love for a stranger…her stranger. Her sadness now grimaces in immersed pink.
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Date: 9/7/2021 7:49:00 AM
Thanks, Kim, your comments are so apropos my friend, Emile.

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