Heartbroken

She was thinking of locking the door to that room, and never going in there again. And yet, she enters; despite her misgivings, as tears trickled down her cheeks. Suddenly, she's overwhelmed by soulful thoughts; having attached themselves to that room in perpetuity, and taken refuge in her memories. The air smells of fresh paint and clean linen and she smiles at the pink carnations painted on the wall, as her trembling fingers lightly trace over them. She put so much of herself into planning every aspect of that room: and it shows. The hand-carved crib, a gift from her father: a bed fit for a princess, who will never arrive. Her mother helped her decorate the nursery: suggesting pink carnations for a girl. Taking one last look, she slowly shuts the door, heartbroken and depressed. There's no longer any hope left in that room. Last week, she suffered a miscarriage: nothing in that room can help ease her hurt; all she found there were tears.
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Ashley Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 6:38 PM
Dear Emile, such poignant beauty spills from your soulful pen. I felt her heartache more and more with every vivid yet tender verse. Your last line truly brings the heartbreak home. Congratulations for your win in Craig's contest. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
Pinet Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 7:40 AM
Thanks, Susan. Your words honor me, my friend, and I appreciate all you have to say, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 6:00 AM
Back with congrats! Apropos
Pinet Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 7:17 AM
Thanks, Kim, as always I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Alex Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 1:25 AM
Hopelessness and pessimism seem to take their due places. Natural in such situations. Indeed, a beautiful poem. Congratulations!
Pinet Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 7:16 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 9:26 PM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my "H" Contest, New or Old with your beautiful poem ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Pinet Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 7:16 AM
Thanks, Constance, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Hankins Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 9:22 AM
Emile, this is poignant and sad and sometimes so many mothers go through at some time in their life. Your imagery was so fine it brought tears to my eyes, seriously.
Pinet Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 10:27 AM
Thanks, Milt, you honor me, and I appreciate all you have to say my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 6:45 AM
She put much thought into her hope, her love for a stranger…her stranger. Her sadness now grimaces in immersed pink.
Pinet Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 7:49 AM
Thanks, Kim, your comments are so apropos my friend, Emile.
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