Heartbound

If only love befell your heart like fragrant scents of new spring hay the joy my dreams would too impart if such a verse I'd dare to say Feel the chances of a raindrop touch the tenderness of a rose pray the music will never stop before the wind of winter blows Let's weave tales of this love's history I am heartbound, please take my hand walk with me through all life's mystery for what only we might understand I know the sweetness of your smiles They take me back to childish wiles Poem Of The Day 11/05/2017
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Date: 11/28/2017 6:29:00 PM
Your sonnets are beautiful, Charlie. I love this one. ...Fran
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Charlie Smith
Date: 11/30/2017 8:28:00 AM
Thank you Francis, your comments are very important to me...
Date: 11/25/2017 8:55:00 AM
Charming poem, Charlie. Beautiful.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 11/27/2017 2:55:00 PM
Thank you Line...
Date: 11/21/2017 10:15:00 AM
Wonderful write Charlie, I am impressed how succinctly you wrote this sonnet with only 8 syllables per line, so descriptive with so few words, and yet it's impact is not diminished. Worthy selection for POTD!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 11/21/2017 1:29:00 PM
Thank you John, so encouraged by your note...
Date: 11/20/2017 6:09:00 PM
I am pleased you won the POTD .This poem is a wonderful poem. i enjoyed reading it.Have a nice evening my friend.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 11/21/2017 1:27:00 PM
Thank you Darlene...
Date: 11/10/2017 2:52:00 PM
Hello Charlie, Sorry I missed your wonderful Sonnet here as earlier posted. Best Congratulations on POTD. "Heartbound" is one that's certainly "heartfelt" in every respect. The romantic nature and effect of this wondrous Sonnet are on display for the reader to truly savor and enjoy. Superb Work My Friend!! A FAVE TOO!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Charlie Smith
Date: 11/11/2017 11:25:00 AM
thank yo very much Gary...
Date: 11/9/2017 7:14:00 PM
Lovely and heart-warming. Great write. Congrats on POTD, Charlie!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 11/9/2017 8:16:00 PM
Thank you Bernard.
Date: 11/8/2017 10:01:00 AM
A delightful sonnet of love, Charlie. Kudos on POTD. Beautiful lines sprinkled throughout. Beautiful sonnet. Love and smiles.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 11/9/2017 10:21:00 AM
Thanks Freddie...
Date: 11/8/2017 4:13:00 AM
Very lovely sonnet Charlie. Congratulations on POTD! Best, Judy
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Charlie Smith
Date: 11/8/2017 8:08:00 AM
Thank you Judith...
Date: 11/6/2017 1:21:00 AM
Such a beautiful sonnet Charlie and so worthy of POTD.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 11/6/2017 12:13:00 PM
Thanks Elizabeth...
Date: 11/6/2017 1:03:00 AM
Well, a winner either way, as this is a sonnet of truly romantic proportions!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 11/6/2017 12:12:00 PM
Thanks Arthur...
Date: 11/5/2017 7:19:00 PM
Sweets for the sweet... the poem and you, dear Charlie. Congrats on this one.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 11/6/2017 12:12:00 PM
Thank you Lin.
Date: 11/5/2017 5:41:00 PM
This is lovely and sweet, Charlie. I see you got a win. BIG congratulations.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 11/6/2017 12:11:00 PM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 11/5/2017 5:23:00 PM
I missed this love poem, Charlie... Congratulations... Romantic art thou
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Charlie Smith
Date: 11/6/2017 12:11:00 PM
Thank you Arturo.
Date: 11/5/2017 2:22:00 PM
Your rhyme is always perfect Charlie! Congratulations on having this wonderful poem honored with POTD! Very deserving! : )
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Charlie Smith
Date: 11/6/2017 12:11:00 PM
Thank you Connie.
Date: 11/5/2017 12:39:00 PM
- Wonderfully sonnet, Charlie - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/6/2017 12:10:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Date: 11/5/2017 11:35:00 AM
A beautiful love story, Charlie. Congrats on POTD!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 11/5/2017 11:42:00 AM
Thank you John...
Date: 11/5/2017 9:40:00 AM
Love the truth, sincerity, flow , depth and beauty of this great sonnet my friend! You hit every mark and GAVE SUCH A ROMANTIC AND INSPIRING PICTURE OF TRUE LOVE, NEW LOVE AND EPIC DESIRE! A fav... thanks ..
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Charlie Smith
Date: 11/5/2017 11:40:00 AM
Always a pleasure to hear from you Robert, thank you...
Date: 11/5/2017 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations on achieving POTD with this wonderful sonnet Charlie. :))
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Charlie Smith
Date: 11/5/2017 11:39:00 AM
Thank you Roy.
Date: 11/5/2017 9:23:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet, Charlie, congratulations on POTD! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Charlie Smith
Date: 11/5/2017 9:25:00 AM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 11/5/2017 9:08:00 AM
pray the music never stops...wonderful and congrats Charlie
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Charlie Smith
Date: 11/5/2017 9:14:00 AM
Thanks Tim...
Date: 11/5/2017 8:27:00 AM
Returning with congrats Charlie--a joy to see you in this space--well deserved!
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Date: 11/5/2017 9:14:00 AM
Thanks again Vijay...
Date: 11/5/2017 8:26:00 AM
What a stunningly beautiful Sonnet, Charlie...truly I am most impressed! Congrats on POTD - much deserved! My very best regards. :) john
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Charlie Smith
Date: 11/5/2017 9:13:00 AM
Thank you John...
Date: 11/5/2017 7:21:00 AM
Congrats Charlie, well deserved :)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 11/5/2017 7:53:00 AM
Thank you Gary...
Date: 11/5/2017 7:05:00 AM
Congratulations on potd honours for this wonderful pen Charlie, enjoyed! Bless :) xomo
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Date: 11/5/2017 7:53:00 AM
Thank you Maureen...
Date: 11/5/2017 5:45:00 AM
Congrats on your POTD, Charlie. Lovely sonnet.
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Date: 11/5/2017 7:52:00 AM
Thank you Agnes...
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