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Heart Symphony

Do You Feel the Trembling Of these cold fingers See my spirit evaporate Only you can restore the beating of my cold heart You are the one compassionate witness standing at the precipice of my awakening For God Is Love Never ending Omniscient, pure A faithful perpetual Love His is a soul Love so much deeper than azure seas Seeing the indigo skies I know they can't contain the Symphony of my God's Heart For Nayda's Heart Symphomy Contest.

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Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/3/2016 10:11:00 AM

Wonderfully written piece Richard.

Funom Makama

Date: 3/13/2016 11:22:00 AM

Epic, wonderful and outstanding. What a great share!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/13/2016 12:52:00 PM

Thanks Funom.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2016 8:45:00 PM

wow, can't believe I never read this one yet. I don't know what your placement was, but it deserved a high one. Congrats for this winning gem.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/13/2016 12:52:00 PM

A belated thanks.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2016 3:03:00 PM

This is a wonderful win...pd

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/13/2016 12:53:00 PM

Thanks Linda.

Len Gasun

Date: 3/7/2016 11:37:00 AM

I love this so much and goes to my FAVE if you don't mind my dear friend, Richard. Thanks for sharing! And Big Congrats as well! :) love lots and big hug, Leonora

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2016 1:26:00 PM

You are kind, thanks.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/13/2016 12:53:00 PM

You are kind, thanks.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/7/2016 1:26:00 AM

"You are the one compassionate witness standing at the precipice of my awakening"..amazing line. I also really like, "His is a soul Love so much deeper than azure seas" That says so much. Late congrats on your win btw Always, Laura

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/7/2016 8:03:00 AM

Thanks again Laua, I appreciate the visit.

Sarita Milliner

Date: 3/6/2016 11:50:00 AM

Great work Richard!! Congratulations on the win!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/7/2016 8:03:00 AM

Thanks Sarita.

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 3/6/2016 1:57:00 AM

A must read poem Richard! You deserve the win! Congratulations! :) -HANS

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/6/2016 8:09:00 AM

Thanks Hans.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/2/2016 9:52:00 PM

Richard, very beautiful congratulations on your win!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/6/2016 8:09:00 AM

Thanks Eve, sorry for the delayed response.

Michael Tor

Date: 3/2/2016 8:48:00 PM

Congratulations Richard on your fine win. Love For God is Love line. Thank you for sharing.

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/2/2016 5:17:00 PM

Richard, a double one! Very nicely done. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra

James Inman

Date: 3/2/2016 8:16:00 AM

Cool Richard, a double, very nice.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/2/2016 9:21:00 AM

Thanks James, it ended up a double because I didn't read directions for the first one.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 3/1/2016 6:33:00 PM

Congratulations on the placement of the contest Richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/2/2016 9:22:00 AM

Thanks so much Nayda.

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/1/2016 4:48:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place write in the Heart Symphony contest. The first 4 words of the second stanza says it all. Peace my friend:)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/2/2016 9:23:00 AM

Thanks Daniel, I whole heartedly agree!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/29/2016 11:41:00 PM

As the syllables racked up in each line, so too, did the power and intensity of your words. The 8th and 16th lines were your strongest. Creation is breathtaking, but it's but the handiwork of the Creator. We're admiring neurons, unaware there is a brain behind it all...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/1/2016 8:56:00 AM

A very thoughtful comment, thanks Timothy.