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"Timeless trust, trapped in Selene's pendant, pulsates purity and faith across cosmic threads, when furry hues tiptoe, upon freezing auroras and saplings of healing, surrender their silence to aging darkness..." As ebony dew ensnares beyond roseate rains and drizzles like honey in dandelion mists, sprinkling haze, across those spruce tributaries of pristine pines, I crawl with a cape of snow, beneath pearly phases of precipice, in the satin embrace of the 'Winter Queen'. Playing with weeds and thorns, my wanderlust amidst intuitions, clasps hope beyond these fickling echoes of misty hourglass. During this solstice, I ride upon my diamond broomstick, surfing across oceanic horizons, and hiding beneath those creamy folds of chiffon clouds, that curtain fated conclusions of my cynical confusions. Destiny has forever whirled fortune in an unfathomable wheel of mysterious merry-go-rounds, wherein, sterling faith streaks lightning, brewing solar storms in the cauldron of life and I whisper those polar hymns of fragranced fog, splattered as blue lipstick stains along slaty dawns. Slaying galactic goblins with my sword of icicles, I have knitted elegant eclipses, from the avalanche of hydrangea ashes, flowing across estuaries of wine tulips towards those gothic vaults, that bleed in white chocolate hurricanes of hunted heartbeats. Maybe, I'm a forsaken prayer, that escapes humble lips and melts upon hateful hailstones, strolling in brisks, slumbering within bohemian valleys, that veil their essence in insightful vanilla rays. Or perhaps, I'm a silent tear, oozing from soft crackles within this haunted 'Heart of Ice', throbbing with solemn sagas in the arctic breaths of Himalayan lilies. As I cradle seas of skies in my palms and stretch my fingers, dipped in golden warmth of the hibernated sun, invisible to my naive eyes, I ponder, will this frost-flake evermore unfurl as an elite ode of dark fantasy? Can the aching of my infernal skin, ever be soothed by inhaling those myrrh scents of the first spring? So, when the 'Goddess of Spirit' sighs, in an oath knitted upon oaks of glacial infatuation, my frozen nirvana quivers, and I seek to steal solace, that shall baptise my bronze conscience, with the star-spun aura of divinity.

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Date: 2/13/2024 10:31:00 AM
Dear Hiya. Hello. I am in awe of your heart and soul that shines through within your entries. This entry and execution alone is extraordinary and I for one as your reader and as a person in general are the better for having the privilege of seeing and yes feeling such excellence. May your beautiful pen be with you always. Blessings Peace and Light always as well (smile) PS - I will return again soon.
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Date: 1/11/2024 9:12:00 PM
I am spell bound....! Don't know how to respond to this avalanche of words flowing down from your quill. As it glides down flooding our minds we are swept off by the torrential power of your words. When I struggle to place word upon word to build one simple image, from your poem images cascade down. Enjoyed your journey through icy terrains impelled by your wander lust. Within this brief time, how did you garner so much vocabulary? "I ride upon my diamond broomstick, surfing across oceanic horizons, and hiding beneath those creamy folds of chiffon clouds, that curtain fated conclusions of my cynical confusions"..... Hiya, I am in awe of your poetic prowess. You don't deserve merely a trophy, but greater laurels of international recognition. You are an asset !
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Date: 1/11/2024 9:15:00 PM
"I ride upon my diamond broomstick, surfing across oceanic horizons, and hiding beneath those creamy folds of chiffon clouds, that curtain fated conclusions of my cynical confusions." Hiya, a trophy is not what you deserve, but greater laurels of international recognition. I am ever in awe of your poetry... and Congratulations!
Date: 1/11/2024 9:41:00 AM
This piece of writing is truly exquisite, displaying a mastery of language and imagery that leaves me in a state of awe, dear Hiya. The vivid descriptions and metaphors you have employed transform the text into a captivating spectacle reminiscent of a cosmic show, adorned with the frozen splendor of auroras and inhabited by slumbering creatures of warmth and comfort. The title and lines within this poem contribute to its overall beauty, crafting vivid scenes that linger in the mind.
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Date: 1/10/2024 1:27:00 AM
Hiya, awesome poem, well deserving top prize and a trophy to adorn your poem. I am from Malta and cannot send you money, otherwise I would have composed you a lifetime premium member. There seems too be no one to help. I cannot send money from Malta.
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Date: 1/9/2024 1:43:00 PM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/8/2024 7:01:00 PM
Nicely written. Congratulations
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Date: 1/8/2024 7:42:00 AM
You are a brilliant poetess! Congratulations on winning 1st place in the contest!
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Date: 1/8/2024 6:48:00 AM
You always amaze with your way between the lines that aspire to invite, inspire, ignite a wonder in the heart of those who read your words. Always in awe. Congratulations on your top win in the contest. Much love, Gina
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Date: 1/8/2024 4:17:00 AM
I don't know where to start, I'm blown away by the creativity and stunning flair that you apply to your poems, every one a distinctive and unique masterpiece. I can see why you win so many trophies. You have poetry running through your veins. Well done dear...Hugs xx
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Date: 1/7/2024 3:47:00 PM
Beautiful about "frozen nirvana" and this inhaling those myrrh scents of the first spring? " I can relate.
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Date: 1/6/2024 5:09:00 PM
so many delightful lines in your poem, Hiya! I don't know where to start with my praises for your beautiful metaphors and splendid scenes. For some reason, I was drawn to these words: 'my wanderlust amidst intuitions, clasps hope beyond these fickling echoes of misty hourglass. Maybe it's because I'm feeling a bit of wanderlust lately. An awesome write! Have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 1/6/2024 12:23:00 PM
Awesome presentation of poetic diction, as always, Hiya. Very impressive discourse in splendor of metaphors-- --surfing across oceanic horizons, and hiding beneath those creamy folds of chiffon clouds, that curtain fated conclusions of my cynical confusions--simply beautiful throughout --a FAVE!
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Date: 1/6/2024 11:52:00 AM
Sometimes when I read your poem, I do not know if its your or Ink, so similar in style and format of poems.. An ethereal journey through the interplay of cosmic forces and the delicate dance of nature. The author's command of language creates a vivid tapestry of imagery, from the 'Winter Queen' and her satin embrace to the diamond broomstick surfing across oceanic horizons..The metaphors are rich and evocative, painting scenes that linger in the mind like delicate strokes of a brush on a canvas.
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Date: 1/6/2024 11:02:00 AM
This poem seems to show a queen who cannot emote but does do through empathy. It is a wonderful visual description. By the way, do you happen to know where I can get one of those diamond broomsticks? Thank you for this read.
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Date: 1/6/2024 10:36:00 AM
Pity that winter doesn't kill out those weeds and thorns, but alas, no such luck. Very descriptive and expressive work you have penned. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara K
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Date: 1/6/2024 9:15:00 AM
Lovely writing, so beautifully done. I am in awe. God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina
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Date: 1/6/2024 8:37:00 AM
Ah where do i start praising this beauty! I absolutely love how you turned this into a carnival of cosmically pleasing metaphors that shimmer in freezing hues of auroras with footprints of furry beings that hibernate during winter. I love your title and so many lines in this makes this a very pretty poem to read. Especially your use of adjectives and how you’ve expressed in a strong manner that depicts winter as an emotion in a personified rhythm. You’ve left me in awe really! And i must say-
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Date: 1/6/2024 8:40:00 AM
I especially loved the lines “ fragranced fog,splattered as blue lipstick stains along slaty dawns.” Your use of lipstick there is so clever! And so artistic! “ I ponder, will this frost-flake evermore unfurl as an elite ode of dark fantasy? “ what a way to ponder, so poetically eloquent! “ glacial infatuation, my frozen nirvana quivers, and I seek to steal solace,“ clever diction really through and through! Nailed it as always! Best wishes for the contest , m sure this will do well

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