Heart

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Hurt and grieve, I still mourn, let fall back into Easeful flight from a painful harsh existence. And retreat to the accumulated happy memories to Remember epic heartbeats of the essence. Together again one day with my persistence. 9/21/2023

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/9/2023 8:00:00 AM

Sweet, hopeful grief. Congratulations dear Eve! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2023 11:32:00 AM

This is so sweet, Eve. I really enjoyed your entry. Congrats for your win.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/24/2023 12:55:00 AM

Oh, how I relate to this poem. After six years I still grieve over my wife. Hugs xx

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/22/2023 11:22:00 AM

So mournful in longing for your lost love, yet with a thread of hope, very moving write~

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 9/21/2023 10:59:00 PM

Nicely penned, Eve, remembering the epic heartbeats.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 9/21/2023 8:52:00 PM

Hi Eve, Persistence is the key to our lost belongings. Hope you find yours. -Richard