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He Was a Beast In a Dark Lair Unseen

He Was A Beast In A Dark Lair Unseen He was a dragon beast in a dark lair unseen; Nights filled with depraved thoughts and deeds; Mouth burning with bile from his spleen Gatherer, hoarder,and planter of dark seeds! A raging beast hiding in a silken cloak; Breaker of serenity's gentle and sweet mists; His captured females died with pretty necks broke With crossed out names on his already dead list! Late night, dark streets this villain cruised; With blood lusts burning in his tortured mind, Pretty victims slashed, beaten and bruised So careful to pick the prettiest he could find. Satanic power given, he could change forms quick; A blink and he could fly with his prey; This real power, evil fed was no parlor trick Such savage nights cutting his victims his play! Unlucky girls lived on to spawn his impish kids; The creatures that roam about Halloween night, Under his spell each one doing evil as he bids Racing into is lair before dawn's saving light! He was a beast in a dark lair unseen; Nights filled with depraved thoughts and deeds; Mouth burning with bile from his spleen Gatherer, hoarder,and planter of dark seeds! 10-18-2015

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Date: 11/10/2015 7:18:00 AM
Deep, dark and just the way I like them, Robert. Excellent!
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Date: 11/10/2015 3:44:00 AM
Very dark, Robert. I really enjoyed this. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/10/2015 12:44:00 AM
Dark my friend. Excellent win!!! Robert.
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Date: 11/9/2015 5:49:00 PM
Amazing write, Robert. Congratulations on your fine win. 7, Sandra
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Date: 11/9/2015 4:30:00 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/9/2015 4:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win!
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Date: 11/9/2015 1:11:00 PM
Robert, Congratulations on your Dark & Twisted #2 win. SKAT
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Date: 10/23/2015 8:59:00 PM
Way to go, Robert. BIG congratulations. what a cool ending line too.
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Date: 10/23/2015 11:47:00 AM
WOW! Mean little fella! Wasn't he! LOL... Congratulations on the win... and the well done write! For sure...
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Date: 10/23/2015 10:35:00 AM
What a beastie! Congratulations and a 7 on your top shelf win, dear Robert! Warmest regards! Pandita
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Date: 10/23/2015 3:04:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful first place win with this superb write Robert!
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Date: 10/23/2015 2:43:00 AM
Robert a well deserved win my friend!!!
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Date: 10/22/2015 10:46:00 PM
Not surprised this became a topster in the contest, Robert. Jolly well done, Sir. Regards, Viv
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Date: 10/22/2015 8:56:00 PM
Real eerie atmosphere! Congrats on your first placement!
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Date: 10/22/2015 6:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/22/2015 5:06:00 PM
Congratulations on win, very draconic imagery
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Date: 10/22/2015 4:03:00 PM
wow this is a scary one Robert - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Date: 10/20/2015 12:43:00 PM
As I read my hearts beating like the Bass on 'Dragon Attack' by Queen. Creepy scary write Robert, just up my street. A pleasure to read you today, smiles, James :) :)
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Date: 10/19/2015 12:04:00 AM
Chilling, sinister, rattles along like a frightened victim running down a Shoreditch alleyway. Great write, Robert. Regards, Viv
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