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He Walks Alone - 5 Minute Contest

He plays guitar and flute Walking the streets alone Asking, looking always on alert Looking for his son Every street in every town Every boy that passes by He looks to see if its Owen Taken by his wife he knows not why Contest. 5 minute challenge Penned . 13 May 2013

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/17/2013 9:45:00 AM

oh this reminds me of the movie about a boy who is searching for his parents. Kind of the opposite of what you have here, a parent looking for a child, and the movie involved music. I think it was August Rush, something like that. GOOD one in five min!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/17/2013 12:20:00 PM

sounds a good movie, I havent seen it, lol will have to tell me how to end my poem....Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 5/17/2013 9:40:00 AM

Hi sass how's the leg? this is a strange one I must look up the contest looks interesting .xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/17/2013 12:19:00 PM

knee coming along very well Mandy, on just 1 stick already, the physio was astounded that I was only 2 weeks post op. Thanks for the comment Seren