He Took On Jerusalem - For Me and U

Jesus died for my sins
But if I live for naught
Am I living freely?
As with constitutions -
Mix of rights and duty!

Jesus died for my sins
What need we be thankful?
"He asked me not, nor I
Of God, a pure conscience!"
Or, "Why should I comply?"

Jesus died for my sins
My job: just Testimony -
Tell all, "No guilt assails!"
Saved a new, great vessel
Tossed on earth, safe in gales

Jesus died for my sins
Deaths victory (but) temporary!
I know how "Good" Friday
Preludes to deaths defeat
He rose, "PAS" Holiday

NOTE: 
My syllable count for "temporary" and "Vic -try" are more India- English (& American accented?). Thanx dear reader. Indulge me, thanX. shalOm
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Goldsmith Avatar
April 15, 2022 at 12:01 PM
Happy "Good" Friday. A "Wonderful" Easter write. Love It. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............
Brown Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 1:54 PM
Hi! I enjoyed the poem and the messages. Thanks for sharing your faith. Blessings ~ Debra
Deo Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 6:33 PM
Always a pleasure my sister in Jesus Christ. ThanX for R faith
DiMino Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 8:34 AM
Sad how too few Christians meditate solemnly on Christ's procession into Jerusalem~Concentrate on the spiritual significance of Palm Sunday.
Deo Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 6:32 PM
Always so glad for your visits, and especially your thoughts. Many of your poems inspire mine. Shalom shalom
Pandit Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 5:15 AM
Heartfelt words of faith, Anil. So wonderful to see you writing in this form--your poetic talents shine!
Deo Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 8:04 AM
Vijay bhaiji, I take enormous encouragement in your words. Peace, health, Divine protection. Thx
George Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 4:34 AM
Beautifully written in Monchielle poetic form ! Spot on !
Deo Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 8:03 AM
O how do I thank Thee, sister Valsa. O thank Trinity for Palm Sunday etc
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