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He Thought Of Roses And He Thought Of Me

He knew how to turn up the soil and seed, Before the sun got hot by summer's glade; And on his lips recounting roses creed He gently viewed them as they swayed; Together in a garden built of tweed A bloom-vestige of grace, softly arrayed; And as the gardener drank his amber tea, he thought of roses and he thought of me.

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 2/18/2025 8:06:00 AM

I see your words weave a beautiful piece dear pal I pray you have a blessed week

Quoth Theraven

Date: 2/4/2025 8:11:00 PM

Mystic, Beautiful roses embodied. -Richard

David Crandall

Date: 1/26/2025 11:14:00 AM

Sweet poem!

Yann Rolland

Date: 1/22/2025 12:13:00 AM

just touching and delicious poem, congrats for the potd dear Rose

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/21/2025 4:04:00 PM

Congratulations, you have earned POTD!Dear Rose. Your words bloom with beauty and tenderness, like beloved emotions cultivated in the ground.

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/20/2025 9:30:00 AM

Yep! POTD when I first read it. Congratulations. As good or better than any soul felt, romantic poetry ever written.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/20/2025 4:36:00 AM

Dear Rose, Your words bloom with elegance and tenderness, like a cherished memory planted in a garden. What a beautiful and graceful reflection—it stirs the heart deeply. Congratulations on POTD! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/19/2025 5:31:00 PM

Dear Vienna, this thought gave me chills. ' as the gardener drank his amber tea, he thought of roses and he thought of me. ' Now that's love ! This is so beautiful and romantic, my sweet friend. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 1/19/2025 4:45:00 PM

Congratulations, Dear Rose, on POTD with your exquisite romantic poem! The rhyme-scheme is especially and intricately beautiful with stunning word-choices. "he thought of roses and he thought of me"... so perfect and true!

Tom Woody

Date: 1/19/2025 2:09:00 PM

Go Rose! I knew this was a winner

Fran Delaney-Barron

Date: 1/19/2025 12:01:00 PM

This is beautiful! Your use of rhyme works especially well due to word choice and elegant descriptions throughout. The simplicity and beauty of gardening is clearly portrayed.

Deb M

Date: 1/19/2025 11:40:00 AM

Congratulations Rose on POTD for this gorgeous poem! Debx

Michael Tor

Date: 1/19/2025 11:04:00 AM

Vie this is so beautiful and He thought of you... Lovely write I am sorry I missed commenting on it earlier, been so busy. A High Honor of POTD this received but a higher honor that He thought of You. The 'Mystic Rose Rose." God bless you and congratulations again for receiving POTD...

Benjamin Bartley

Date: 1/19/2025 9:17:00 AM

Congrats on your POTD. If you ever need a gardener, let me know. Thanks for sharing!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/19/2025 9:00:00 AM

So Sweet! And in perfect rhyme! Congratulations on POTD, Mystic! ~ Gershon

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/19/2025 8:46:00 AM

Oh my Vie. So lovely and painfully romantic! Congratulations! :)

Arlo Parker

Date: 1/19/2025 8:41:00 AM

POTD worthy indeed! Congrats, Mystic. =;o]

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 1/19/2025 8:05:00 AM

Elegant piece! Congratulations on POTD honours! xomo

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/19/2025 7:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write. I wish you would write more. Have a wonderful day/week with your win as you write away..................