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He Lied

Whipped Sharp, stinging pain Dripping scarlet from my heart Stabbed Torturing, horrible agony Shooting up my spine Pounding Throbbing Hurting Tears stain my cheeks My cheeks, my cheeks Rushing down A waterfall of misery A thunderstorm Each flash another streak of lightening Trickling across my heart Each rumble of thunder my screams Ear-piercing, sorrowful screams Each echo of rain pummeling the ground The tears that pummel my face Shattered soul Beyond repair Despair Despair Despair, despair He broke my heart He killed my soul Mercilessly flinging me Into a hole Deep hole Awful hole I whimper I cower He left me, he left me I’m dying It hurts Whispered lies of “I love you” Ringing loudly in my head He lied, he lied HE LIED He lied

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/24/2024 7:31:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/13/2016 8:49:00 AM
Bianca, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 2/3/2010 7:37:00 AM
wow this is definitle a strong poem, you truely captured the feeling of heart break. this is a great write. with great imagery
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Date: 1/23/2010 7:22:00 AM
Thanks everyone. I try my best for a 13 year old!
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Date: 1/23/2010 7:16:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Bianca. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/23/2010 6:51:00 AM
Powerful piece Bianca, i could feel the hurt >> excellent >> James
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Date: 1/22/2010 1:10:00 PM
Thanks!
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Date: 1/22/2010 12:56:00 PM
Heart wrenching write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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