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He Kissed Me (Italian Sonnet)

It was something quite unexpected, your feelings, I surely could not tell, emotions you had hidden so well. Oh, those feelings of being rejected, my Love, you must have suspected all of the words I could not say. You kissed me and took my breath away. Forever we would be connected. A caress from the lips, I so desire. Be still, the thunder of my heart. Bathed I am in a liquid fire, holding on as we come apart. Feelings, yes, so unexpected. For Italian Sonnet Contest

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Date: 6/13/2010 2:30:00 PM
Sounds like a first love to me. I think there is a connection to firsts that are always with us. Good luck in the contest! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 6/8/2010 7:10:00 AM
Very nice, a passionate little love sonnet there, Karla. Good luck in the contest, sweetie. Luv, Andea
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Date: 6/8/2010 6:03:00 AM
Breathtaking beautiful Sonnet Kayla. Best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2010 7:43:00 PM
I can still remember kisses that affected me this way. Great passion springs from your romantic heart, Karla! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/7/2010 6:41:00 PM
Well Karla ..Constance will simply luv this entry as she is such a romantic at heart.. good luck and your words are so tender and feeling .. and the best kind..so unexpected.. so lasting.. good luck.. with luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 6/7/2010 6:06:00 PM
Great poem. Nicely done. Thank you for your comments on my poem for embrace contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/7/2010 4:35:00 PM
SO MUCH LOVE IN THIS WRITE -IRMA
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Date: 6/7/2010 4:13:00 PM
Great love write..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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