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Kids bullied him; he did not have one friend,
and hollow were his teachers’ words to him.
Perpetual anxiety can bend
the troubled mind; his thoughts grew more than grim.
They mushroomed, and they spiraled next into
sick fantasties – a strange kaleidoscope
of wicked things that he was going to do,
for no one saw or tried to help him cope.

One day he showed up, but not just with one
of his dad’s guns. Cacophony he brought
as peers, chaotic, all began to run.
There reigned hysteria as students sought
safe havens! As he chased some down the stairs,
he grinned, “Now MY Apocalypse is theirs.”

Sept. 25, 2017 For John Hamilton's  Eight word challenge -4 Poetry Contest
 THESE 8 WORDS used: HYSTERIA  KALEIDOSCOPE PERPETUAL  CHAOTIC
 CACOPHONY APOCALYPSE  SPIRALED  HOLLOW
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Inman Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 11:00 AM
A deep, rather disturbing poem Andrea. Well written. You asked about poems of mine, I found these three that I don't think you've read, Regret, Rhoda and Phil-A Sad Goodbye, -Untitled-. Thanks for asking.
Evans Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 8:33 PM
Heavy. Very heavy. This is the world we live in. Good poem.........peace!
Allison Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 8:31 PM
dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 6:56 PM
This is too real Andrea and a remarkable entry for his contest. I see this getting top honors! : )
Dietrich Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 7:28 PM
just middle of the road, but that will do.
Ashley Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 4:10 PM
Wow Andrea, what an evocative write this is. Congratulations on your win with this well written and dark poem.
La France Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 1:27 PM
Andrea, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this emotional and wonderfully penned poem!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 1:13 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your win. You used the words nicely, albeit a bit scary.
May Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 8:26 PM
A chilling write Andrea..Congrats on your win
Hamilton Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 4:58 PM
Great write although the subject matter is so tragic, the 8 words were effectively used, congrats on a great shared win!
Daniel Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 6:19 AM
Oh! That's scary and sad, Andrea, different people react so differently..a nice entry:)
Tor Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 11:36 PM
Powerful truth in the molding of a killer based on how they are treated. One of my favorite of yours Andrea. Cleverly written. I wrote one about Richard Kuklinski a mob hitman with over two hundred murders. How his parents beat him and mentally abused him. How they created this monster of a man.
Wigley Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 5:55 AM
....and sadly such things happen. Well writ, Andrea, a strong write, I'm sure you will do well. VIv x
White Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 4:42 AM
That is one powerful and frightening sonnet Andrea... And it pinpoints the problem, where did the cycle of violence start?
Anish Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 6:28 PM
Powerful words!! If you punch in Burnt Offering Matthew Anish you will see that poem. You do not have to go to poetrysoup to see it. Just punch in the title and my name on the computer and you will see "Burnt Offering". Yours Matthew Anish
Bauer Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 10:54 AM
an excellent poem, andrea, but more frightening because this scenario seems to be happening more and more. this should place right at the top in the contest...
Allison Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 8:06 AM
Gee what a chilling poem you wrote weaving those words in so perfectly! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Krampe Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 7:24 AM
Great use of the challenge words, Andrea - your storytelling flows so well that they are barely noticeable. Good luck in the contest.
Pandit Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 6:43 AM
A story that reads like real life events in the recent past--this form of poetry comes with your unique stamp--Kudos and best for a win!
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