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The cockcrow spins dreams drifting into reality and the scratches still sting Alone my thoughts my heart beat to a sombre drum and the imagination runs Close again my eyes halt the drowning sea float over my swollen head Words painted often call the tree branch holds your name whispers blown away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/8/2017 7:53:00 PM
Hi Tim, an amazing write. I agree with others here that the last stanza is beautiful but the second stanza I especially felt.
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Date: 8/7/2017 10:44:00 AM
That last stanza my friend.... so beautiful.
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Date: 8/6/2017 7:15:00 PM
great imagery poem, Tim. Especially the last stanza.
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Date: 8/6/2017 4:48:00 PM
The name will stay forever, Tim....a reminder of something beautiful and special. Lovely poem, albeit sad...
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Date: 8/6/2017 3:54:00 PM
Beautiful but sad Tim i love that final stanza the imagery is so lovely:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/6/2017 3:07:00 PM
Dropping by to witness the beauty of your poem.. still an amazing work of art. Congrats Tim! I'm back!! _Aiyah
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Date: 8/6/2017 12:40:00 PM
Beautiful write Tim...love the last line! :)
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Date: 8/6/2017 12:18:00 PM
- Some wounds will never heal, Tim ... they pop up occasionally - A touching and wonderful poems - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/6/2017 10:44:00 AM
I can feel the sadness in this one Tim. I like the part tree branch holds your name :)
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