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Hazards of Heart - Choose Your Ending

her heart hangs in halves hollowed and hinged upon hooks his halo now horns - - - - - - - hardened by hatred - she hilts the mangled hooked husk - the hunted now hunts - - - - hymns of hope fill her hues of horizons past heal her nipped wings now whole

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Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 1/6/2024 5:29:00 AM

A beautiful image of growth through ones own painful story. Inspired writing! A.S.

Christina Bowring

Date: 8/25/2023 2:53:00 AM

This is such a beautiful, poetic poem FJ. ‘His halo now horns’ Great writing! It is intriguing like Bill says and thought provoking. Leaves you wanting more.Keep inspiring ….

M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/18/2023 1:04:00 PM

Nice depth of feeling in this piece, beautifully penned.

Fj Thomas
Date: 6/28/2023 4:07:00 PM

Hi ML, thank you :)

Carl Fraser

Date: 5/19/2023 7:59:00 AM

Hi FJ,Very deep from the heart. You have such beauty in your passionate soul and it spills out on the page. Excellent. Blessings Carl

Fj Thomas
Date: 6/28/2023 4:06:00 PM

Ahh Carl, your words are always so uplifting. Thank you <3

Gary Radice

Date: 5/6/2023 1:16:00 AM

Very clever, artistic and poetic FJ. I've read it through a few times over a couple of days and the ending I chose matched my thoughts about the world and my mood at that time. :) Cheers - Gary

Fj Thomas
Date: 5/7/2023 4:31:00 PM

You choose the ending exactly how they were written :) Each ending was written on a different day, and from different a mood lol. Thank you very much Gary.

Bill Baker

Date: 4/17/2023 4:11:00 PM

Congrats on your win FJ! Intriguing poetry, full of imagery and mystery. Very engaging and made me want more. Thanks for sharing your feeling and thoughts with us through your excellent poetry, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Fj Thomas
Date: 4/22/2023 5:19:00 PM

Well good evening my poet friend from Texas :) Thank you Bill.

James Inman

Date: 4/13/2023 8:58:00 PM

Love the shape and the content. Your strength is inspirational.

Fj Thomas
Date: 4/22/2023 5:18:00 PM

Thank you very much James. I appreciate you passing my way.

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/23/2023 12:12:00 AM

Looks like shes coming in on the Rebound. !

Fj Thomas
Date: 3/26/2023 7:20:00 PM

Lol that's what I like to think :D Good evening Joe :)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/17/2023 3:21:00 AM

Oh my FJ... wonderfully intricate and intense, well done talented Lady!

Fj Thomas
Date: 3/26/2023 7:19:00 PM

Well hello there Jim :) Thank you very much kind sir!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2023 9:46:00 AM

- Congratulations :) - hugs

Fj Thomas
Date: 3/26/2023 7:18:00 PM

Thank you søster :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/5/2023 8:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I love this creative write. Have a blessed Sunday....................

Fj Thomas
Date: 3/26/2023 7:18:00 PM

Thanks so much Paula. Been in and out of town but finally have a chance to log in more than a couple minutes.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/5/2023 6:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your win FJ! :)

Fj Thomas
Date: 3/26/2023 7:16:00 PM

Thank you Linda Alice!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2023 9:42:00 PM

Great series with those sharp images. Congrats on your win.

Fj Thomas
Date: 3/26/2023 7:16:00 PM

Thank you Andie. Sorry for the late reply, been going on a few of the husband's business trips with him so took me a minute to get back on.

Ann Peck

Date: 3/4/2023 9:23:00 AM

This is a wonderful description! Congrats on your win!

Fj Thomas
Date: 3/4/2023 6:27:00 PM

Thank you Ann :)

Susan Lawrence

Date: 3/4/2023 7:19:00 AM

Love this !! Crazy descriptions bringing horrors to life ! Belated Congratulations on your win FJ . Susan :)

Fj Thomas
Date: 3/4/2023 9:21:00 AM

Hi Susan, thank you Madam! :)

Charles Messina

Date: 3/4/2023 6:23:00 AM

This is SO good, FJ. Many could relate to this...I'm sure. Congratulations on your top win! Charlie

Fj Thomas
Date: 3/4/2023 9:20:00 AM

Good morning Charlie, I am very glad you liked this. Thank you :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/4/2023 6:21:00 AM

Dark, deep and dark, so many facets to this simple haiku, wonderful writing, Flo:)

Fj Thomas
Date: 3/4/2023 9:19:00 AM

Thank you very much Jo

Joseph May

Date: 3/1/2023 9:41:00 AM

From love's halo to the horns of heartbreak, Lovely write Flo

Fj Thomas
Date: 3/2/2023 7:04:00 AM

Most of us know that pain, some worse than others. Thank you Joseph :)

Susan Woodrow

Date: 3/1/2023 6:21:00 AM

Spooky! I’m picturing a serial killer…:)

Fj Thomas
Date: 3/1/2023 8:32:00 AM

I was thinking more metaphorical but since you've said that I can see it lol!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/28/2023 5:40:00 PM

Ooh…I could see this as a winner!

Fj Thomas
Date: 2/28/2023 8:30:00 PM

Thank you Madam :`D

Gary Radice

Date: 2/28/2023 1:12:00 PM

A Haiku that deserves another poem all of its own..It's left me wanting to know more..Great write! Cheers - Gary

Fj Thomas
Date: 2/28/2023 5:10:00 PM

Gary hi :) Thank you so much. You make me want to add the other stanzas :D

John Lawless

Date: 2/28/2023 10:48:00 AM

this is WICKED GOOD...as a Bostonian would say. it hooks you, plays you and reels you in.....at least it did me. Should do well in the contest...if it does't there'll be an inquiry.

Fj Thomas
Date: 2/28/2023 11:41:00 AM

Lolol I believe I have heard that phrase on television years ago. Thank you so much John, it has a couple more stanzas but I was only supposed to post one. And nooo need for inquiries lol. This may be a bit too dark for many. Thank you again John :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/28/2023 5:26:00 AM

- A great one, søster :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Fj Thomas
Date: 2/28/2023 5:33:00 AM

Hello søster :) Thank you so much.

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/28/2023 5:11:00 AM

It's all good, FJ but I like the top half the best. Great to see you again. I hope the world has been treating you kindly.Good luck sweet lady:)

Fj Thomas
Date: 2/28/2023 5:33:00 AM

Good morning Daniel, I'm glad you said that, I was not supposed to post more than one stanza. Thank you :)