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Hawks

Wandering along the winding trail I watch as hawks play ducking and diving, swooping and tumbling and climbing up again, making a magnificent display backed by their shrill cries to each other Riding the thermals climbing up in unison wild spirits air bound They have three fledglings to rear, so back to hunting they go, sharp eyes spotting the rustle in the undergrowth wings folded they plunge down like raining bullets striking hard they carry it back to the nest to feed the chicks Three fluffy small chicks baby plumage now changing they look so scruffy Now fully feathered they flap and stretch their wings then first one takes to wing finding it hard to land it misses its mark a few times, at last alighting undignified on a branch New generation one day they too will have chicks and so the cycle goes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/5/2016 9:50:00 PM
I love Hawks, they remind me of Beltain. I have the Animal Oracle Book by Phillip Carr-Gomm, chief Druid. And the Irish word for hawk in that is Seabhac. I hope you don't mind me leaving comments like this /|\
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Date: 9/27/2013 6:58:00 AM
You are really gifted with the haibun form...loved your birds! ^_^ Y.L.N
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Date: 9/25/2013 9:47:00 AM
like the hawk that takes to the skies, you have taken to the haibun form,, love your poetry here,,,
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/25/2013 11:19:00 AM
Ty Harry I love this form so pleased you like it Shadow x smile
Date: 9/25/2013 7:01:00 AM
well written Shadow....beautiful birds
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Date: 9/25/2013 11:17:00 AM
ty Joseph they are I love birds of prey Shadow x smile
Date: 9/24/2013 7:51:00 PM
They are fascinating birds to watch, along with eagles and falcons.
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Date: 9/25/2013 4:30:00 AM
Yes Robert I agree could spend hours watching them ty for reading Shadow x smile
Date: 9/24/2013 4:58:00 PM
I loved that line how they plunge down like raining bullets. A very nice haibun. I see you did two. that's awesome.
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Date: 9/24/2013 5:28:00 PM
Hi Andrea Ty this is my second haibun I really like the form glad you liked it Shadow x smile
Date: 9/24/2013 4:22:00 PM
...and so the cycle goes! Captured it! I think.
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Date: 9/24/2013 4:23:00 PM
hi Gerald Ty I appreciate your review and time Shadow x smile
Date: 9/24/2013 10:53:00 AM
the circle of life so fascinatingly portrayed... a flight that takes me to a place of wonder, shadow... delighted:) huggs
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/24/2013 4:27:00 PM
Ty Nette new to this style but really like it so glad you got taken there Shadow x smile
Date: 9/24/2013 10:06:00 AM
A picture perfect write - you have nature at it's very best - lovely to read infact it read as if I were being narrated to on Spring Watch or similar T.V. programme. Enjoyable subject.
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Date: 9/24/2013 4:26:00 PM
Hi Anna Marie Ty for such a nice review so inspiring Shadow x smile
Date: 9/24/2013 5:19:00 AM
yes, that is the circle and cycle of life, birds eat bees and bees make honey and the cycle goes on
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Date: 9/24/2013 4:24:00 PM
hi Dr Ram it sure does Ty for your time reading Shadow x smile
Date: 9/24/2013 4:51:00 AM
I like the chose of topic matter..I enjoy what we call a Ringtail Hawk or Red Tail Hawk here..The one that was nesting here disappeared..I think that the man down the road who raises those fighting roosters probably shot it..They are a rare sighting anyway..Reads like a winner in the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..I am still wrestling with the poem Moments..Sara
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/24/2013 5:01:00 AM
so sad Sara there are no birds of prey in Malta the pigeon fanciers killed them all man has a lot to answer for Ty for reading it is not for a contest just a write lol Shadow x smile
Date: 9/23/2013 2:34:00 PM
Circle of life...very, very nice job! How they can relate to humanity so well.
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Date: 9/23/2013 2:44:00 PM
hi Drake I love the various cycles that happen all around us sometimes going unnoticed Ty for reading Shadow x smile

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