Hawks

Wandering along the winding trail I watch as hawks play
ducking and diving, swooping and tumbling and climbing
up again, making a magnificent display backed by their 
shrill cries to each other

Riding the thermals
climbing up in unison
wild spirits air bound

They have three fledglings to rear, so back to hunting
they go, sharp eyes spotting the rustle in the undergrowth
wings folded they plunge down like raining bullets
striking hard they carry it back to the nest to feed the chicks

Three fluffy small chicks
baby plumage now changing
they look so scruffy

Now fully feathered they flap and stretch their wings
then first one takes to wing finding it hard to land
it misses its mark a few times, at last alighting 
undignified on a branch

New generation
one day they too will have chicks
and so the cycle goes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Wolf Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 9:50 PM
I love Hawks, they remind me of Beltain. I have the Animal Oracle Book by Phillip Carr-Gomm, chief Druid. And the Irish word for hawk in that is Seabhac. I hope you don't mind me leaving comments like this /|\
Ndlovu Avatar
September 27, 2013 at 6:58 AM
You are really gifted with the haibun form...loved your birds! ^_^ Y.L.N
Horsman Avatar
September 25, 2013 at 9:47 AM
like the hawk that takes to the skies, you have taken to the haibun form,, love your poetry here,,,
Hamilton Avatar
September 25, 2013 at 11:19 AM
Ty Harry I love this form so pleased you like it Shadow x smile
May Avatar
September 25, 2013 at 7:01 AM
well written Shadow....beautiful birds
Hamilton Avatar
September 25, 2013 at 11:17 AM
ty Joseph they are I love birds of prey Shadow x smile
Pettit Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 7:51 PM
They are fascinating birds to watch, along with eagles and falcons.
Hamilton Avatar
September 25, 2013 at 4:30 AM
Yes Robert I agree could spend hours watching them ty for reading Shadow x smile
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 4:58 PM
I loved that line how they plunge down like raining bullets. A very nice haibun. I see you did two. that's awesome.
Hamilton Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 5:28 PM
Hi Andrea Ty this is my second haibun I really like the form glad you liked it Shadow x smile
Kithinji Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 4:22 PM
...and so the cycle goes! Captured it! I think.
Hamilton Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 4:23 PM
hi Gerald Ty I appreciate your review and time Shadow x smile
Onclaud Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 10:53 AM
the circle of life so fascinatingly portrayed... a flight that takes me to a place of wonder, shadow... delighted:) huggs
Hamilton Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 4:27 PM
Ty Nette new to this style but really like it so glad you got taken there Shadow x smile
Docherty Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 10:06 AM
A picture perfect write - you have nature at it's very best - lovely to read infact it read as if I were being narrated to on Spring Watch or similar T.V. programme. Enjoyable subject.
Hamilton Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 4:26 PM
Hi Anna Marie Ty for such a nice review so inspiring Shadow x smile
Mehta Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 5:19 AM
yes, that is the circle and cycle of life, birds eat bees and bees make honey and the cycle goes on
Hamilton Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 4:24 PM
hi Dr Ram it sure does Ty for your time reading Shadow x smile
Kendrick Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 4:51 AM
I like the chose of topic matter..I enjoy what we call a Ringtail Hawk or Red Tail Hawk here..The one that was nesting here disappeared..I think that the man down the road who raises those fighting roosters probably shot it..They are a rare sighting anyway..Reads like a winner in the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..I am still wrestling with the poem Moments..Sara
Hamilton Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 5:01 AM
so sad Sara there are no birds of prey in Malta the pigeon fanciers killed them all man has a lot to answer for Ty for reading it is not for a contest just a write lol Shadow x smile
Tacito Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 2:34 PM
Circle of life...very, very nice job! How they can relate to humanity so well.
Hamilton Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 2:44 PM
hi Drake I love the various cycles that happen all around us sometimes going unnoticed Ty for reading Shadow x smile
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