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Having drank cold tea

Drinking cold tea is less than soothing It quenches thirst but it was intended for more and I just missed the right moment So now I'm full of cold tea that I gulped down It sits uncomfortably in my stomach What a story... I'm clearly hiding something Cold tea in my stomach is the mood I'm not sure how I swallowed either down You don't feel buoyant weighted with cold tea Maybe you can imagine that? There's a sense of melancholic regret that feels intangible That you want to shake off as not mattering because it doesn't, right? I wish it was as simple as the box says: Freshly drawn boiled water Brew for 3 minutes Add milk to taste Sometimes it is and my comfort is in this cup But the china feels cold and sterile The whole process unsoothing The mood sits in my stomach without a technique that uses the same tools and ingredients to result in a different outcome There are definitely options But I'm a bit weighed down with my choices to think them through Tea will soothe me again I'll forget And it's not tea's fault that I drank it cold I just need to forget Shake it off It's not important after all

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Date: 7/9/2024 6:29:00 PM
I'd try a spoonful of jam to balance it. Maybe strawberry. I like ice tea, so I can only feel sorry for you. Thank you for this poem. It holds my interest.
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Date: 7/9/2024 11:22:00 AM
I can hear the tea mumbling in the cup as it cools....to cold....not knowing why. An interesting write DD as it often seems that tea mimics the moment
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Date: 7/9/2024 11:37:00 AM
It's unusual for tea to be dasdardly, but that's what happened today. Clearly a rogue teabag, I shan't hold it against the whole batch. Thanks for stopping by - always feels a bit like a celebrity calling as you were such a notable poet on my arrival all those months ago :) (still are!)
Date: 7/9/2024 10:01:00 AM
I love how you write your experiences and thoughts in such a seamless manner. I am a tea person and not a very coffee person. But not really cold tea. Iv never tried, probably i would feel the same if i did. The ending made me smile haha. Not the ice cream i had not its fault that i feel guilty today after having it too. Pleasure reading your work always dear dd. Sending you light always
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Date: 7/9/2024 11:09:00 AM
Thank you Ink, I think the shot of cold tea mirrored my mood so completely that it seemed worth talking about (in a poem rather than conversation haha). I never went so far as to elaborate though as I wanted the concept of cold tea to do all the talking :) thank you for your comment x

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