Having a Wife

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He knew it is trouble having a wife But being single would be double strife So he married a lady Whose character was shady So sad, as cat and rat, they lived their life!

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/12/2022 1:20:00 PM

A brilliant Limerick Valsa… Belle

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/12/2022 10:59:00 AM

Without a doubt, he took the wrong path. Valsa. He's trapped in her clutches and cannot retract his pledge. Great Limerick!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/11/2022 7:58:00 PM

Love this Valsa. Great Limerick.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/11/2022 7:56:00 PM

Looks as if the wife has the upper hand in this battle, Valsa... Club in hand. On his head, fear lands... As for me, I like my women a tad softer. lol. Cheers, gw

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/11/2022 11:20:00 AM

Hello Valsa, they should have never been married. It will not last. Hugs.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/11/2022 11:01:00 AM

It astonishes me how many couples just love to rile each other, e.g., check out the video of Courtney Taylor Clenney in the elevator with Christian "Toby" Obumseli! Aloha!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/11/2022 8:39:00 AM

Bad choice. Trouble ahoy.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/11/2022 6:40:00 AM

Oops he certainly took a wrong turn Valsa. Now he's stuck with her lol. Tom