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Haunting

Spirit of the past from wooded dreams now you’ve come to haunt or so it seems touching lightly down to leave your mark trees reflect the high beams in the dark. An in between land goes a way not home but only to more nights by tunes alone, leading down a drunken path to apathy launched by waste that ignites fires dastardly. In forty years the route to pain is clear, a venture bold with manufactured fear that starts from deep within the very groin and filters through the heart without the knowing. This is a mind that folly will not get, leaving it the one to feel regret. 12/28/17

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Date: 1/5/2018 4:34:00 PM
Such a lovely Sonnet, Janis! Congratulations on your nice placement in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/5/2018 2:54:00 PM
Congrats, Janis. Well done.
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Date: 1/5/2018 1:34:00 PM
beautiful sonnet sweet Janis, congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 1/5/2018 12:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Janis - blessings and best wishes for a Happy New Year, friend! :-)
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Date: 1/4/2018 7:48:00 PM
A beautifully sad introspective write Janis. Congratulations for your wonderful win.. Warmest wishes ~Susan
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Date: 1/4/2018 12:19:00 AM
Congratulations, Janis on your win.
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Date: 1/3/2018 11:17:00 AM
Nice write Janice, congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 1/2/2018 1:46:00 PM
Well done, Janis. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/28/2017 3:34:00 PM
It come to all at one time or another. Nice write Janis.
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Date: 12/28/2017 2:33:00 PM
a poem of sad reflection that paints a dark picture
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Date: 12/28/2017 2:09:00 PM
Very nicely done! I love the contrast between groin and knowing...grinds like the haunting it is!
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