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I awoke at midnight - the image was dark and bright. Innocence in a Shirley Temple dress, twirling like a wind chime, singing like a songbird: Did you ever see a dream walking? Well I did Did you ever hear a dream talking? Well I did The hot breath of death is lurking at the door. Unseen hands, rip, jerk, lift the comatose ghost. Witness to the girl’s woebegone shriek is Frankie, balled up tight in the corner of the school’s coat closet shelf, his halloween mask over his frightened face. The other witness is the mammillary moon, growing brighter to expose a serial killer. I awoke at midnight - the image was dark and bright as I curled up, blanket to my chin, and let the moon shine in… 9/20/2019 Tania Kitchin’s Haunted Poetry Contest Movie: Lady in White Song: Did You Ever See a Dream Walking written by: Mack Gordon/Harry Revel

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Date: 9/28/2019 1:39:00 PM
Kim, wow so creepy, congratulations on your win in the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 6:52:00 PM
Thank you, Constance!
Date: 9/28/2019 11:55:00 AM
Kim, Congratulations on your winning placement with your spooky write!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 6:52:00 PM
Thank you, Tania!
Date: 9/21/2019 7:22:00 PM
very haunting atmosphere you gave to your poem, Kim. A sure win and high placement I bet.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2019 8:58:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 9/21/2019 7:06:00 AM
This is perfect for the contest - spooky... Bless you
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2019 10:00:00 AM
Bless you, sweet Regina!
Date: 9/20/2019 7:00:00 PM
Eerie poem here. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2019 7:18:00 PM
Thank you, Matthew! Hugs...Kim
Date: 9/20/2019 3:56:00 PM
Did you ever see the movie "Lady in White?" This music was in there, whenever the worst possible scary parts happened. "Did you ever see a dream walking? Well I did Did you ever hear a dream talking? Well I did" I cannot hear this without my hair standing on end. Great poem Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2019 4:02:00 PM
Me too! And yes, I own the movie! So many great scenes!!
Date: 9/20/2019 1:51:00 PM
Loved your writing in this, Kim - just superb lines of creativity throughout to thoroughly raise my creeped-out goosebumps. Great job. All the best ... CayCay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2019 2:33:00 PM
Thank you CayCay!
Date: 9/20/2019 12:24:00 PM
Very creepy my friend. I love the way you crafted this, you do amaze me. Best wishes in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2019 2:33:00 PM
Thanks so much, Chris
Date: 9/20/2019 12:09:00 PM
The hot breath of death at the door, all the right ingredient's of a spooky tale. Well written Kim, good luck. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2019 2:23:00 PM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 9/20/2019 11:20:00 AM
Spooky poem :) Very realistic - ghost tale. I hope you do well. Bless you
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2019 11:22:00 AM
Thank you! Bless you too <3

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