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Happy Valentines Day

I kneel here before you heart all a flutter would ask you myself I can’t with this stutter my heart is all yours If you want it, its true no one else has ever claimed it before you Be mine XX Just like this diamond you are a jewel above the rest HAPPY VALENTINE’S DAY

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/16/2013 11:05:00 PM

this is really sweet and I love that "shape!"

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/17/2013 2:35:00 PM

Thank you Andrea....Seren

Opondi Ougo

Date: 2/15/2013 4:37:00 AM

Beautiful...wonderfully put..thank you Seren :-)

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/15/2013 3:58:00 PM

Thank you....Seren

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/14/2013 10:39:00 PM

This is a jewel. And I do not studder.

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/15/2013 3:57:00 PM

awwww thanks for stopping by...Seren

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 2/14/2013 10:09:00 PM

Cutie Po. My imagination says the diamond is shimmering, hence the wee wave to the outline. :D I just penned a couplet for your contest... Shaft of Light, yours, right?... sigh... just missed it! oh well, I invite you to give it a read as you inspired it, hon, Title is Tomorrow's Rewards. Thanks for the inspiration all the same. All writes are worth the effort. Hugs, Cyndi

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/15/2013 3:57:00 PM

you must have a vivid imagination...Seren

David Williams

Date: 2/14/2013 10:03:00 AM

Ok I will....ha ha ....David Re-send monkey please....

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/14/2013 11:09:00 AM

lol have done so...Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/14/2013 9:10:00 AM

This is a wonderful and sentimental write my friend! I loved reading this illustrious poem this morning! What a tremendous piece, surely a meaningful poem, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/14/2013 7:26:00 PM

thanks Russell...Seren

Jennifer Spase

Date: 2/14/2013 8:04:00 AM

I like the simplicity and shape of your poem.

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/14/2013 8:12:00 AM

LOL P.D. wanted a quick entry for her contest, thats why i wrote in silly words... Thanks for stopping by...Seren