Happiness

Don't give up when the mist makes your eyes blind. Don't give up when your lover says good bye to you. Don't give up when you did something bad and you regret. Don't give up when you are torn up and you can't find your pieces. Never give up in spite of been nobody in life. Be, and only be for yourself, then after yourself you will find the others to be with. Remember that happiness doesn't live next to you, but inside of you.
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Ray Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 11:44 PM
absolutely, well said....
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
September 16, 2026 at 12:17 AM
Thank you so much Timothyxxx
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 3, 2024 at 2:58 PM
Hello Maria, Good advice for everyone. I loke this so much, it will be my fav. Congratulations on your POTD. Hugs. /DRLENE/
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 4, 2024 at 10:08 AM
Hello Maria, It is like aq summer day here in Canada. I like this poem so much. Your welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
June 3, 2024 at 11:58 PM
Good morning my dear Darlene. Thank you so much for your uplifting words and the Fav. Hugs/ María
Kulkarni Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 1:14 PM
Such a beautiful message, Maria!! Thank you for sharing it with us. It's very inspiring and very true!
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 12:59 AM
Thank you very much Sumita, for reading and leaving your kind comment. Blessings!
Wraith Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 4:24 PM
What a powerful, motivational message here. Particular love the closing line: “…happiness doesn’t live next to you, but in you.” So often we forget that we are responsible for our emotions and lives. Happiness is a choice, not something that happens to you. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD, well deserved. May you always choose happiness every morning.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 11:29 PM
Good morning Edward. Thank you very much for stopping by, for your lovely words and wishes. I appreciate it. I hope you also wake up full of happiness. Have a great day. Blessings!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 9:02 AM
When it is all said and done, yes, happiness must be found inside. There is a grieving period, but don’t stay there. Congrats on POTD!
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 10:00 AM
Thank you so much for your nice comment Kim. Blessings!
Andresen Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 2:15 AM
- A positive and uplifting poem, Maria :) - (I read this yesterday, but forgot to congratulate, sorry, my friend ) - A wonderful poem, congratulations on p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 2:54 AM
Good morning Anne-Lise. Thank you very much my dear friend for your wishes and uplifting comment. Have a wonderful weekend! Hugsxxxx
Greenhough Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 10:20 PM
Congratulations on POTD.. I enjoy these words of courage.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 1:44 AM
Thanks a lot for your kind words Hilda. Blessings!
Nicole Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 8:09 PM
' happiness doesn't live next to you, but inside of you. ' So true, Maria. Always be true to who you are. I completely agree, my dear friend. Your thoughts curl gently around me. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 1:46 AM
Thank you very much for your uplifting comment, which I really appreciate, Brandy. I hope you have a great day!
Scott Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 6:10 PM
Maria, this may well make it to my fridge door! True x as once we realise the search for contentment is internal life takes on a whole new dimension.. worthy poetic wisdom for Poem of the Day. Blessings, Sam :) x
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 1:49 AM
Thank you very much dear Sam for your uplifting and lovely words. I appreciate them. Have a wonderful day!
Darnell Sr Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 5:33 PM
"Pearls of Wisdom," Maria. And one of good cheer, too! An enriching message you penned. Congratulations to the POTD, Maria! I hope you have a good evening! Warm Regards, William
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 1:51 AM
Good morning dear William. Many thanks for your beautiful comment and wishes. Hoping you have a wonderful day!
Baker Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 3:18 PM
"Remember that happiness doesn't live next to you, but inside of you", priceless wisdom, Maria. Congratulations on your fine POTD, my friend! Enjoy your special day of recognition. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 3:28 PM
My dear friend of Texas, I really appreciate your message. You don' t know how happy I am, not because of your Congratulations, but because of hearing from you! Love you both. I hope and blow the best wishes to you and Saraxxxx
M  Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 12:10 PM
Absolutely beautiful Maria …..simple and clear!! Congratulations on POTD…..Debx
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 1:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comment Debx. I appreciate it. Hugsxxx
Bartley Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 12:10 PM
Congrats on being POTD. Nice poem.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 1:01 PM
Thanks a lot Benjamin. I aprecciate your wishes and nice comment. Blessings!
Clarke Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 11:48 AM
Uplifting, inspiring pearls of wisdom. Congratulations on your POTD :-)
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 11:53 AM
W J Clarke you uplifted my evening with such a kind comment. Many thanks to you my friend! Blessings.
Slaughter Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 10:26 AM
A very uplifting piece, Maria. Congrats on POTD, as well.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 11:00 AM
Hello there Jim, thank you so much for your kind message and wishes. Blessings!
Anaya Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 10:05 AM
Very kind and warm supportive community it is, and what comes around goes around, what you share in your positive poems, spreads like wild fire, sweet Maria. Happiness begins within! Congratulations on your POTD with a poignant message! Enjoy your day xhugsx Anaya
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 10:59 AM
Dear Anaya. Your comment, which I really appreciate, is very uplifting to me. Thanks a lot for your kind words. Blessings my friend. Hugs!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 9:05 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your powerful "Happiness" write. So True... Fav for me... Have a blessed day writing away.......
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 10:57 AM
My dear friend Paula. Many thanks for your lovely message and also for the Fav. I appreciate it. Have a wonderful afternoon. Blessings!
Crandall Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 8:50 AM
Great advice Maria, for overcoming the things we go through. I liked, "remember that happiness doesn't live next to you, but inside you".
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 10:50 AM
Many thanks David. I appreciate your kind message. Hugs!
Empress Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 7:59 AM
What a powerful reminder for all, happiness lives within you, never give up despite the challenges one may face! Well delivered! Congratulations on receiving potd. This is soul warming and very uplifting! sending you light always
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 10:49 AM
Your comment is so uplifting my friend. Thank you very very much. Hope you have a great afternoon my friend!
Fowler Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 7:37 AM
A very poignant write Maria. I especially like "...Don't give up when you are torn up and you can't find your pieces." Very nice. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 10:47 AM
Thank so mych my dear Linda. I appreciate it. Hugsxxx
Buhagiar Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 6:31 AM
Many congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Very inspiring.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 10:45 AM
Thank you my dear Victor. Have a great evening!
Cunningham Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 6:03 AM
Very inspiring verse Maria, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 10:03 AM
Thank you very much Tom. I appreciate it.
May Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 5:47 AM
True words, Congrats on POTD
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 5:49 AM
Thank you so much Joseph. Blessings!
Rodgers Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 4:57 AM
Dear Maria, Just read your poem and saw it got POTD! YEAH!!! Your words are so powerful and inspiring. They really hit home. Such a beautiful piece with the world. Never stop writing—your voice matters. Big hugs, and Blessings, Daniel
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 5:45 AM
Thank you very much dear Daniel for your words of encouragement. I really appreciate them. Blessings! Hugs!
Jones Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 2:52 AM
Great advice and an inspiring potd! Congratulations
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 4:01 AM
Thank so much dear Karen for your nice comment. Blessings!
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