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Halloween Night

The moon cast eerie shadows on that dark October night We went out trick and treating and looked a scary sight Our costumes were so creepy, we were dressed as ghosts and ghouls We carried turnip lanterns we’d carved them at our schools Our bags were fit to bursting and filled with candy treats And rosy red apples and chocolate, we had so much to eat The mansion house was gloomy when we walked up to the door It was recently occupied and we’d never ventured there before I cautiously rang the doorbell, the door creaked and swung open A tall wizard stood there, at his side a huge pink frog was croakin The wizard welcomed us inside and he performed a magic trick He was such a jolly gentleman, his christian name was Rick Rick’s pitch black cat crept in the room, how its green eyes shone Rick waved his magic wand, in a flash the cat was gone! In its place was Ginnie the witch she was Rick’s lovely wife She was holding a Halloween cake and she cut us each a slice Soon it was time for us to go as it was getting rather late They’ve invited us to learn magic tricks oh I can hardly wait! We grabbed our bulging bags of sweets and I hurried to my house I hope I can learn a spell and turn my pesky sister into a mouse ! Halloween contest Sponsored by Eve Roper 10-25-16
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Onclaud Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 1:51 PM
jaw-dropper.. congrats on your greeat win, jan..huggs
Allison Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 2:21 PM
Thanks Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
Stebbings Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 2:16 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jan. I love the name Rick for a Magician. Barry.
Allison Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 4:45 PM
I just wanted something to rhyme with trick lol so it was Rick:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 12:04 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poems in the Halloween contest, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 4:45 PM
Thanks Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodgers Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 11:08 AM
Congrats Jan - a great fun poem
Allison Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 4:44 PM
Thanks Dave:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 10:02 AM
Jan CONGRATULATIONS on your win in the contest with this wonderfully penned poem, I love it ~
Allison Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 10:53 AM
Thanks Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
De Yecouba Avatar
November 1, 2016 at 5:52 AM
"We were dressed as ghosts and ghouls"---I read it funny!
Allison Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 10:53 AM
Thanks so much for dropping by Sabbath:-) hugs Jan xx
Callus Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 10:24 AM
Ha Ha! I bet you wish you could learn such a spell, Jan:) A very enjoyable Halloween write. Hugs // paul
Allison Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 10:52 AM
I would love it Paul as she has 3 cats lol:-) hugs jan xx
Duggan Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 2:09 AM
Oh so scary Jan and well written Halloween poem, well I guess on Monday I will be dishing out sweets and fruit to all our little Ghosts and god knows what banging on my door, they don't visit our street much as we have a miserable lot of neighbours, but I aways have my basket of goodies ready, good luck in the competition, take care......Vera
Allison Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 8:47 AM
We are often away at Halloween which pleases me as I don' t like it much the little kids are great but sometimes the teenagers let the side down and old people can be intimate I dated if they don't get goodies:-( hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 8:12 PM
oh that last part was so cute, Jan. A sure winner I see here!
Allison Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 12:29 PM
I couldn’t resit the humour Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Promise Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 6:09 PM
very imaginative. Good luck in the contest, a 7.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 2:18 PM
Great imagination for a fun Halloween Jan. Best of luck in the contest! : ) 7
May Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 10:55 AM
Wonderful write Jan...best wishes
Trifiatis Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 5:55 AM
Enjoyably creepy dear, Jan! Great narration good luck and a seven my friend! SOUPMAIL!
Van Der Merwe Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 11:34 PM
Great write Jan - all the best in the contest. Regards, Mark
White Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 11:14 PM
It has your own unique style, as always :) I love it!
Bear Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 8:09 PM
Absolutely adorable Good luck in the contest Hugs Edith
Krampe Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 5:55 PM
What a fun Halloween, Jan. So full of imagination. Good luck on the contest. Agens
Rycroft Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 2:30 PM
Loved it Jan, It rhymed, it flowed, it was funny, another good poem x you've just got IT xxx
Allison Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 3:07 PM
Thanks Wendy I have no idea where these poems come from I just start to write and the mind goes into overdrive:-) hugs Jan xx
Ball Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 2:07 PM
Too cute Jan. Loved this. Great description and imagery. God Bless and thanks for your kind words on my "I Hate My Computer". Been gone awhile but am doing much better and am back on line again.
Allison Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 3:08 PM
Glad to see you back Judy ... computers seem to have their own agenda at times:-( hugs Jan xx
Wass Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 12:17 PM
Very good written descriptively well s
Allison Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 3:09 PM
Many thanks Wendy hugs Jan xx
Boles Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 10:38 AM
excellent
Allison Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 3:14 PM
Thanks alan:-) hugs Jan xx
Turner Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 9:30 AM
This is a happy Halloween poem. Well done Jan. We all know you could never turn anyone into a mouse. You're too kind:)
Allison Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 3:15 PM
My imagination runs wild ... no sister's were hurt in the writing of this poem lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Y. Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 8:36 AM
Hi Jan, I really enjoyed your Halloween tale.The rhymes are good. Eve will love this. She will know it's you because it's written your own unique style. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A Big seven:-) Alexis
Allison Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 3:17 PM
I wonder if she will guess I wrote it Alexis! I just can't help the humour creeping in lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Dalei Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 7:33 AM
Very interesting Jan. Loved ur expression. A good story. Best wishes for the contest..........//hugs
Allison Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 5:14 PM
Thanks Manmath :-) hugs Jan xx
Stebbings Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 7:25 AM
Lovely amusing Halloween poem, Jan. Good luck with the Contest. Barry.
Allison Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 5:15 PM
Thanks Barry:-) hugs Jan xx
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