Halloween Dreams

I slumbered, nestled in the bed, trapped in a horror, steeped in dread. I’d had that awful dream again; long tendrils probed inside my brain. They’d severed my umbilic cord, and left a dead, unfeeling gourd. My matter splashed, my brainpan scooped, and now a magic marker looped in creepy patterns on my skin: cruel eyes, slit nose, a horrid grin. But worse, I saw the glint of steel, and winced at how that blade would feel. I could not scream, nor could I shout; although I tried, no sound came out. Whew! Two firm hands shook me awake, then, “Mom, this is the one I’ll take.”
————- for the 12-16 Lines of a Scary Halloween Rhyme Poetry Contest sponsored by Tania Kitchin written on 10/13/22
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Bueckert Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 8:50 AM
very creative take on this Jeff, I loved it. The nightmarish pumpkin life, nicely done
Fowler Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 7:09 AM
Superb Jeff. I love this! Congratulations on your win! :)
Kyser Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 7:16 AM
thanks, Linda, this was fun.
Miller Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 2:05 AM
Just Wonderful; I love it! Super writing!
Kyser Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 4:20 AM
Thanks, Terry - it was a fun contest!
Flood Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 5:18 PM
Back with congrats on your gore infested win, Jeff. Terry
Kitchin Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 4:29 PM
Jeff, congratulations on your winning placement with your well penned scary poem with a cute ending!
Kyser Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 4:49 PM
Thanks so much for hosting an enjoyable contest, Tania!
La France Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 3:14 AM
Jeff, love how you gave us horror and then in the end we have to smile, wonderful and best of luck in the contest, blessings Constance
Tor Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 6:47 PM
Your Halloween mindset in this creative entry is a definite scare to all that read. Best outcome in the contest Jeff...
Gorelick Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 6:46 PM
Reminds me of the movie "Field of Screams" ghoulish! Robert
Kyser Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 7:24 PM
Ha, glad you enjoyed!
Forbes Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 6:08 PM
So good!!!
Logan Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 4:08 PM
Much more a nightmare than a dream... crazy scary no matter what it's called.
Kyser Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 4:21 PM
Suppose so, didn't want to give too much away too early, lol
Flood Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 3:42 PM
Crikey Jeff… can’t beat a bit of gore on Halloween. Good luck. Terry
Flood Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 4:36 PM
I’ve been saving a Halloween tale for Halloween or a contest such as this… alas it’s over sixteen lines. So I’m pondering this contest as we speak.
Kyser Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 4:21 PM
Ha, I'm looking forward to your bit of ghoulish rhyme, Terry!
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