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Halloween Dreams

I slumbered, nestled in the bed, trapped in a horror, steeped in dread. I’d had that awful dream again; long tendrils probed inside my brain. They’d severed my umbilic cord, and left a dead, unfeeling gourd. My matter splashed, my brainpan scooped, and now a magic marker looped in creepy patterns on my skin: cruel eyes, slit nose, a horrid grin. But worse, I saw the glint of steel, and winced at how that blade would feel. I could not scream, nor could I shout; although I tried, no sound came out. Whew! Two firm hands shook me awake, then, “Mom, this is the one I’ll take.”
————- for the 12-16 Lines of a Scary Halloween Rhyme Poetry Contest sponsored by Tania Kitchin written on 10/13/22

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Date: 10/31/2022 8:50:00 AM
very creative take on this Jeff, I loved it. The nightmarish pumpkin life, nicely done
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Date: 10/31/2022 7:09:00 AM
Superb Jeff. I love this! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/31/2022 7:16:00 AM
thanks, Linda, this was fun.
Date: 10/31/2022 2:05:00 AM
Just Wonderful; I love it! Super writing!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/31/2022 4:20:00 AM
Thanks, Terry - it was a fun contest!
Date: 10/30/2022 5:18:00 PM
Back with congrats on your gore infested win, Jeff. Terry
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Date: 10/30/2022 4:29:00 PM
Jeff, congratulations on your winning placement with your well penned scary poem with a cute ending!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/30/2022 4:49:00 PM
Thanks so much for hosting an enjoyable contest, Tania!
Date: 10/14/2022 3:14:00 AM
Jeff, love how you gave us horror and then in the end we have to smile, wonderful and best of luck in the contest, blessings Constance
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Date: 10/13/2022 6:47:00 PM
Your Halloween mindset in this creative entry is a definite scare to all that read. Best outcome in the contest Jeff...
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Date: 10/13/2022 6:46:00 PM
Reminds me of the movie "Field of Screams" ghoulish! Robert
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/13/2022 7:24:00 PM
Ha, glad you enjoyed!
Date: 10/13/2022 6:08:00 PM
So good!!!
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Date: 10/13/2022 4:08:00 PM
Much more a nightmare than a dream... crazy scary no matter what it's called.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/13/2022 4:21:00 PM
Suppose so, didn't want to give too much away too early, lol
Date: 10/13/2022 3:42:00 PM
Crikey Jeff… can’t beat a bit of gore on Halloween. Good luck. Terry
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Terry Flood
Date: 10/13/2022 4:36:00 PM
I’ve been saving a Halloween tale for Halloween or a contest such as this… alas it’s over sixteen lines. So I’m pondering this contest as we speak.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/13/2022 4:21:00 PM
Ha, I'm looking forward to your bit of ghoulish rhyme, Terry!

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