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Half of My Heart

Before the rain fell and the sky's rainbow set the scenery, I had a day that will never cease my mind. The center of my core fell into a creek by the cottage and drifted down slowly into rigid waters. All of your affection dwindled like a soft Spring snowflake.. -melting...melting...melting- Winter willows weep for the loss of its warmth, and I weep for the loss of your affection. Considering your disregard, my loneliness was expected. Now, a part of me seems to be missing... a part of you. Our light bulb went dim, and our white turned grey, all within one hour of time. Perceptions of consequences decided upon your actions left my warmth arrested by your cold. How will I live without you? My tenderness is dripping slowly into soft memories we shared. Half of my heart is yours... half of my heart is lost. You've searched for your puzzle pieces, and I thought I was the one who would make you whole. All I was to you was a mess you had to clean up. Underneath the picture lays a broken mirror. So broken the broom slid right through it with ease. You left me with such ease.. Seven years of misery and distress to come. Women are supposed to love wholeheartedly, and partners are supposed to reflect like prisms radiating into... their lovers soul. Behind my sternum and between my ribs, my heart has almost been emptied. Oh, how I regret letting you borrow my essence; my internal bosom God gifted to me thinking it was all yours. My tenderness is dripping slowly into soft memories we shared. Half of my heart is yours... half of my heart is lost. Date Written: December 29, 2015

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Date: 5/7/2016 7:17:00 AM
Wow, this really tugged at my heart strings, such a tactile emotive piece! Congratulations!
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Date: 5/3/2016 5:44:00 AM
Very passionate and emotional piece... Congrats Laura, for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/3/2016 10:14:00 AM
thank you Teddy :)-luloo
Date: 5/3/2016 3:24:00 AM
Deep and moving Luloo. Congratulations on your wonderful win! #7 ; )
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/3/2016 10:14:00 AM
thank you Connie! you sweet lady :)-luloo
Date: 5/3/2016 2:47:00 AM
Laura, very touching words stirring up deep emotions! congrats! well deserved.
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/3/2016 10:13:00 AM
thank you Susan :)-luloo
Date: 5/2/2016 11:52:00 PM
Beautiful write Laura:) Congratulations on your awesome win:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/3/2016 10:13:00 AM
thank you very much Jo, you are always so sweet :)-luloo
Date: 5/2/2016 10:58:00 PM
A very touching write Laura....the heart has a memory all its own...Congrats on your win...
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/3/2016 10:12:00 AM
thank you Joseph :)-luloo
Date: 5/2/2016 10:55:00 PM
Congratulations on this one, Laura. It was worth returning to the forefront.
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/3/2016 10:12:00 AM
thank you Lin, congrats are in order for you also :)-luloo
Date: 5/2/2016 9:40:00 PM
Hi Laura, I remember this beautiful poem and so glad to see it received a high placement in this contest! Congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/3/2016 10:11:00 AM
thank you Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 5/2/2016 7:12:00 PM
Congratulation my lovely friend on your beautiful win. Loved always, bl
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/2/2016 7:56:00 PM
thank you BL for always being so kind to me! :)-luloo
Date: 1/12/2016 7:59:00 AM
Laura, congratulations on winning in the Free Verse Extravaganza contest! -Hans :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/25/2016 2:01:00 PM
Thank you Hansteven :) *smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/12/2016 3:10:00 AM
Lovely write Laura.. a much deserved great win... big congrats!!
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/25/2016 2:00:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Upma very much :) *smiles*
Date: 1/11/2016 12:35:00 PM
I am touched. I am moved. I honor your feelings. Congrats on your win,Laura. Love, Anisha D
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Date: 1/11/2016 10:07:00 AM
So very moving and emotional, Laura. Congratulations on your fine placement! Hugs, Sandra
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/11/2016 10:09:00 AM
Many thanks Sandra...*smiles*
Date: 12/31/2015 9:47:00 AM
Great job, Laura - so emotionally moving ... CayCay
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/31/2015 10:21:00 PM
Many thanks CayCay :) *thanks*
Date: 12/29/2015 5:30:00 PM
LuLoo this is deep and pretty heartbreaking to read - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/29/2015 6:04:00 PM
Thank you Jan :)

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