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Half Insane and Loving It

I part the curtains of my memory and suddenly we are young again. Half cousin to a distant life, I recall summer skips and marble throws. The way we owned our little world on 2nd Avenue, and explored every nook and cranny of our Italian hub. Yes, they were the best years of our lives and we didn't know it. As summer sun danced upon our shoes, with a hammer we hit those little firecrackers and pow, pow, pow ! Banging pots and pans we woke everyone. Stomping, marching, and yelling with energetic voices. Who could miss three boisterous children, in the prime of their lives. Those were our free spirit days, strong legs and young fleshy arms that were hugged one day and slapped the next. Today I close the light gently on that flamboyant living. It was a cinema-scope moment of the seventies, one that won't return. Somehow we coped. Perhaps love was the healing balm the anoint of our resilient souls. We were young guns fired up for life. Always ready for adventure. Today I let the firecrackers pop in my head only once in a while, down comes the hammer, pow, pow, pow ! Black dots aligned you bro bring down the hammer one more time, as I watch gun smoke come out of the sidewalk. Poof! Silence. We were half insane, and loving it. The End.

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Date: 9/22/2023 1:22:00 PM
What great memories of your childhood, so vivid with 'summer sun danced upon our shoes' and of course the pow pow pow! I feel like I was there with you~
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/22/2023 1:22:00 PM
those were the days Michelle, thankyou for taking the journey with me, :)
Date: 9/21/2023 11:21:00 PM
it can be sane and safe, to be unsane, i guess, your poem is wonderful and youthful, enjoyed a lot yann
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Date: 9/22/2023 1:23:00 PM
I so appreciate your visit Yann:)
Date: 9/21/2023 10:15:00 PM
“Perhaps love was the healing balm” yes! I love that line and the way you do storytelling and flow of your lines truly is so soul warming to read. Its so refreshing, the sense of nostalgia which emanates from your rosy ink beautiful poetess! Marble throws! That brought so many childhood memories for me! And “we were young guns fired up for life” i recently had one of my longest frnd come over, after a long time, since pandemic hit, and we couldnt help reminiscing! Good old fearless days.luv this
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Date: 9/22/2023 1:23:00 PM
I so appreciate your lengthy comment, rich and beautiful in depth and honest Ink, E, love it
Date: 9/21/2023 7:36:00 PM
These memories are mine.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/22/2023 1:24:00 PM
Nice to know we share them S, kindred spirits indeed :)
Date: 9/21/2023 6:34:00 PM
What a lovely walk down memory lane Rose. I sometimes pity the younger generations for their lack of feeling half insane. What will their memories be when they grow old? "Remember when I played that PlayStation game." Have a good day, my friend.
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Date: 9/22/2023 1:24:00 PM
Thank you for stopping into my poems Jerry, God bless you keep well

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