Haiku No 18

Dear Victor, you've captured the vibrant yet dormant spirit of Fall so beautifully. A lustrous strand of haiku! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

I love "...chilly rains smell near..." Nice line and nice string of haiku for autumn / winter. dear Victor :)

Beautiful imagery, and guess what it's raining here right now. I can hear the sound of thunders. The wind is strong, seems like the trees will be empty soon. Blessings, friend

A lovely trio of Haikus, Victor. thanks for stinging them together into a show of nature for us. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

You ended this with the most encouraging line "warm spring will wake all". Good images here.

we have to resist winter, and write again thanks for the delicate haikus Victor

Fabulous Haiku triology for the fall Victor, a magical time of the year… Belle

Autumnal trio of Haikus that leave me imaging what you've described with much care. It's 101 today, all week 94 degrees. We are hit with the climate change! Wishing you a beautiful Fall!

great imagery, and feel my friend.

Wonderful haiku's, Victor. Autumn's my favorite time of year. Your descriptions are exquisite!

Victor, a wonderful haiku collection!

A pretty string of haikus, Victor. I love the images, especially the golden path, and the mention of sleeping fireflies. :)

Lovely autumnal haiku series, each vying with the other. This is the first time I am reading your haikus. They proclaim aloud that you are adept in this poetic form too

A striking string of autumnal haiku which you tackle with a capable pen, Victor. At least here in Malta we are still enjoying lovely weather, and I'd be swimming had I not come down with a bad cold :( Best regards // paul

I enjoyed your wonderful Haiku write/picture. Have a wonderful/blessed~~day/weekend...............

Love the golden colored path & chilly rain smells near. Very nice!

Fireflies lie torpid... great imagery in all three of your haiku here Victor. You do this form very well.

"fireflies lie torpid underground or thick tree barks - " Great imagery! Love it.

Gorgeous images, Victor

Victor, your Haiku set, truly encapsulates the breathtaking transformation of nature as it gracefully transitions into the enchanting season of autumn. The vibrant colors of the foliage, ranging from fiery reds to earthy oranges and golden yellows, create a mesmerizing tapestry that seems to come alive before our eyes.

Beautiful capture of nature as it transitions to autumn. Wonderful images, Victor.

Yes, spring the time of rebirth. Fall is beautiful before the silhouetted trees are outlined in the dead of winter. Thanks for sharing this wonderful work with us and for your visit to my page. Sara

Ah, this chain of haikus is so beautiful, I'm loving the journey through different autumnal, chilly and then spring imageries.. Your words definitely create a profound atmosphere with delicate tapestry of most delicate feelings in these lines.. "golden coloured path", "no resting place for nature", "fireflies lie torpid", "warm spring will wake all" Absolutely enjoyed reading this!!

A lovely string of haikus, Victor:) love the first one especially:)

This is absolutely stunning! Your set of haiku, my senryu is nothing compared to how profound and how descriptive your chain of haiku are! They all flow very well together, paints imagery seamlessly and in an artistic manner! Loved this