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Haiku King Tags Haiku Prince

The pigeon arrived, With rays of the morning sun; Amongst dew's first kiss. A pleasant morning, Full of splendorous brisk air; Magnificent bliss. Word from my steward, Graces the rolled parchment scroll; My torch has been lit. Ruben sent his note, Expressing that he tagged me; And now I am it. With my royal pen, I ponder the soul I’ll tag; As the day unfolds. The Queen of Footle..? Perhaps not, she’s been away; Who will I bestow..? I search my minds eye, Eating my cluster of grapes; Before I address. Selecting the man, Known as the Prince of Haiku; Nathan Bane Leccese. ________________ * Nathan, you are it!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/24/2009 8:17:00 AM
Oh Bravo Tesla! Twins. lol. ;) What fun to watch you in your Haiku exchanges. I love the pigeon delivery...outstanding write my friend. A delight indeed.
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Date: 5/22/2009 1:23:00 PM
Bravo Raul, awesome write to a newcomer, James
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Date: 5/22/2009 12:58:00 PM
Good choice on who you taged King, Nathan was a good choice, and this is a good poem. Love Elizazabeth
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Date: 5/21/2009 12:01:00 PM
Dear Raul, What a wonderful TAG I love this Game A Family Game that everyone is Playing I spent last night going from one tag to the next I'm still not done Superb Write ALWAYS... HG Raul, Thank-YOU for the beautiful Medal ALWAYS YOUR Friend in POETRY...HG
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Date: 5/21/2009 8:17:00 AM
mmm ... things like this make you a king indeed.
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Date: 5/21/2009 8:11:00 AM
Awesome write - excellent tag! Nice going Raul! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/21/2009 2:23:00 AM
wonderful write king of HAIKU---charma
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Date: 5/21/2009 12:51:00 AM
Raul thanks for your welcome comments today Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/20/2009 6:15:00 PM
Wonderful tribute, Raul! Let's see what Nathan gives us. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/20/2009 6:14:00 PM
Wonderful writing Raul...
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Date: 5/20/2009 5:47:00 PM
Check your mail
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Date: 5/20/2009 5:44:00 PM
Thanks Raul!...Only 6 days here on the site and I'm already tagged! Wow! Alright I guess I better get to work. :-)
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Date: 5/20/2009 5:42:00 PM
"Eating my cluster of grapes" man your making me hungry Raul! this made me laugh loving you writes!
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