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ebb tide in its wake broken shells in disarray on a lonely shore

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Sharon Winter

Date: 2/8/2011 7:05:00 AM

Lainie, this is so beautiful and lonely. just took a drive to the shore last weekend. we recently lost our dog and I have been so lost myself and quite miserable. broken shells...like my heart. this haiku speaks volumes for me and reminds me of recently walking the shore, and so much more. love your writing and miss you too sweet friend. thanks so much for stopping by. hugs, shar xoxo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2011 3:10:00 PM

This is very lovely. I hope you are back for a long stay!!

Daver Austin

Date: 1/22/2011 12:18:00 PM

Looking out to sea. I can see it clearly. Nice image. Love, Dave

Date: 1/22/2011 9:18:00 AM

Wonderful use of imagery in this poem. Well done my friend! Thank you for the kind comment. Have a great weekend. Karen

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/20/2011 3:52:00 PM

Great images to create a pleasant picture of the sea, Elaine

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/20/2011 12:52:00 PM

Beautiful Elaine, love this sea haiku and feel the loneliness.... like after a storm:))

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/20/2011 9:16:00 AM

Another beautiful photo you have painted with your words Lainie. Splendid. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/20/2011 8:53:00 AM

Very vivid image that can be seen on many shorelines, just as it can here in Florida, Elaine. Beautifully worded haiku! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/20/2011 8:11:00 AM

Stunning image Elaine ;-)

Christine A Kysely

Date: 1/20/2011 7:24:00 AM

I can see the shore....Christine

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/20/2011 6:51:00 AM

Lovely images Elaine and what I would not give to be on that lonely shore right now away from all this snow..my friend.. a beautiful read and entry for the contest.. good luck with luv..