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ebb tide in its wake 
broken shells in disarray
on a lonely shore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/8/2011 7:05:00 AM
Lainie, this is so beautiful and lonely. just took a drive to the shore last weekend. we recently lost our dog and I have been so lost myself and quite miserable. broken shells...like my heart. this haiku speaks volumes for me and reminds me of recently walking the shore, and so much more. love your writing and miss you too sweet friend. thanks so much for stopping by. hugs, shar xoxo
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Date: 1/22/2011 3:10:00 PM
This is very lovely. I hope you are back for a long stay!!
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Date: 1/22/2011 12:18:00 PM
Looking out to sea. I can see it clearly. Nice image. Love, Dave
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Date: 1/20/2011 3:52:00 PM
Great images to create a pleasant picture of the sea, Elaine
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Date: 1/20/2011 12:52:00 PM
Beautiful Elaine, love this sea haiku and feel the loneliness.... like after a storm:))
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Date: 1/20/2011 9:16:00 AM
Another beautiful photo you have painted with your words Lainie. Splendid. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/20/2011 8:53:00 AM
Very vivid image that can be seen on many shorelines, just as it can here in Florida, Elaine. Beautifully worded haiku! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/20/2011 8:11:00 AM
Stunning image Elaine ;-)
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Date: 1/20/2011 7:24:00 AM
I can see the shore....Christine
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Date: 1/20/2011 6:51:00 AM
Lovely images Elaine and what I would not give to be on that lonely shore right now away from all this snow..my friend.. a beautiful read and entry for the contest.. good luck with luv..
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