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haiku colors preen sounds splash word pictures capture beauty ~ nature on parade

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Date: 8/31/2023 2:59:00 PM
I sure enjoyed this one. It's fun to see the winners of this contest. Congrats
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Date: 8/24/2023 11:05:00 PM
How gorgeous is every line woven in this haiku: absolutely stunning; i love how you’ve written “ word pictures capture beauty” ah the depth and the wordplay throughout these 3lines, is impeccable. Love this . Congratulations my friend
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Date: 8/24/2023 8:17:00 PM
Amazing word choice and pacing! Congrats placing 10 out of 71 entries in my contest!
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Date: 8/24/2023 6:16:00 PM
Love the imagery on your Haiku, congratulations on your win
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Date: 8/3/2023 12:26:00 PM
So lovely!
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Date: 8/2/2023 7:57:00 PM
I think the best haiku is one of nature, this grabs the imagination, hope it's a winner for you~
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Date: 8/2/2023 10:03:00 AM
Wonderful imagery in your Haiku Sam. Lovely theme also, unique and clever. Thank you for sharing...
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Date: 8/1/2023 1:59:00 PM
The imagery presented in your haiku captivates the reader's imagination with its exquisite beauty. Your haiku adheres faithfully to the traditional form, evoking a distinct voice and tone. I express my gratitude for graciously sharing your remarkable poetic talent.
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Date: 7/30/2023 2:45:00 PM
A wonderful haiku write. Have a great day/week.....................
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/25/2023 10:24:00 AM
Hi Paula! Thank you! Looking at haiku from the inside out was a unique experience! Blessings to you!
Date: 7/29/2023 7:40:00 AM
Splendid!!!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/25/2023 10:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Jo! Your messages are always a source of inspiration and motivation! Blessings my friend!
Date: 7/29/2023 3:20:00 AM
Good Morning Sam. Wonderful and beautiful imagery for readers to vision. Your haiku is in true form including voice and tone. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Take Care (smile)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/25/2023 10:20:00 AM
Good morning Lisa! Am just now catching up on emails! Thank you for your patience! Your lovely feedback made me :D. Once I learned about writing haiku here on the soup I discovered how much I enjoy the form and all of its first cousins! So much fun to create images in the cadence of haiku! I so appreciate your perceptive, inspiring, compliments. Thank you for taking the time to visit and comment! Sending you late summer blessings!
Date: 7/28/2023 1:10:00 PM
A beautiful haiku, Sam!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/25/2023 10:13:00 AM
Thank you so much Paige! I really enjoy writing haiku and the other spinoffs from haiku! So glad you enjoyed it! Blessings my friend!
Date: 7/28/2023 1:08:00 PM
a Haiku frozen in a moment......
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/25/2023 10:08:00 AM
Thank you so much John! The contest theme was such a unique way of looking at haiku! Blessings to you!
Date: 7/28/2023 12:54:00 PM
Ahh!! I like this one. Thank you for sharing it to today. It is displaying some very good elements of poetry. Sara
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/25/2023 10:06:00 AM
Hi Sara! Just now getting caught up on emails! The theme of this haiku contest was fun to think about especially in terms of the classic essence of haiku! So glad you liked it! Sending you blessings of late summer joy!

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