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Haiku - Morning

marigolds smiling coloring the morning dew blue jay complaining For Rick's contest.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/27/2011 10:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in ^RICK's "One Haiku" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 6/26/2011 12:56:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku, Barbara. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

Gautami Phookan

Date: 6/26/2011 12:31:00 AM

Beautiful image you've painted with this.. congrats Barbara on your win. love, gautami

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/25/2011 5:26:00 PM

Creative work..Congrats..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/25/2011 5:23:00 AM

line 1 is typically used as a title [I know you were thinking of the to title or not issue by the way you posted it] Nice CUT here, excellent use of sensory input, personification is not used in haiku so change the word [smiling] & you [I believe] have achieved haiku ;)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/24/2011 10:43:00 PM

Your last line sure made me smile so much, could picture that blue jay! Super congrats on this very lovely haiku, Barbara ^_^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2011 8:59:00 PM

barbara, this is so cool. I love the twist ending of the blue jays complaining. Awesome win.Congrats.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/24/2011 6:37:00 PM

Congrats BG on your beautiful win in the contest with this beautiful Haiku luv..enjoy...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/23/2011 9:07:00 AM

very cool Haiku BG ..good luck in the contest.. vibrant visuals and that last line is priceless ...

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/23/2011 7:34:00 AM

Awesome entry, Barb. Excellent haiku. Reads like a winner. Good luck. Thanks for your comments. Have a great weekend. luv Ralph

Kash Poet

Date: 6/23/2011 6:57:00 AM

Very nice imagery.Enjoyed.