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haiku - morning

marigolds smiling coloring the morning dew blue jay complaining
For Rick's contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/27/2011 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ^RICK's "One Haiku" contest Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2011 12:56:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku, Barbara. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
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Date: 6/26/2011 12:31:00 AM
Beautiful image you've painted with this.. congrats Barbara on your win. love, gautami
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Date: 6/25/2011 5:26:00 PM
Creative work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 6/25/2011 5:23:00 AM
line 1 is typically used as a title [I know you were thinking of the to title or not issue by the way you posted it] Nice CUT here, excellent use of sensory input, personification is not used in haiku so change the word [smiling] & you [I believe] have achieved haiku ;)
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Date: 6/24/2011 10:43:00 PM
Your last line sure made me smile so much, could picture that blue jay! Super congrats on this very lovely haiku, Barbara ^_^
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Date: 6/24/2011 8:59:00 PM
barbara, this is so cool. I love the twist ending of the blue jays complaining. Awesome win.Congrats.
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Date: 6/24/2011 6:37:00 PM
Congrats BG on your beautiful win in the contest with this beautiful Haiku luv..enjoy...
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Date: 6/23/2011 9:07:00 AM
very cool Haiku BG ..good luck in the contest.. vibrant visuals and that last line is priceless ...
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Date: 6/23/2011 7:34:00 AM
Awesome entry, Barb. Excellent haiku. Reads like a winner. Good luck. Thanks for your comments. Have a great weekend. luv Ralph
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Date: 6/23/2011 6:57:00 AM
Very nice imagery.Enjoyed.
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