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Valley of Mist

a sliver of spring the sun peeps over the crag... shadows melt away © Harry J Horsman 2018

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Sherry Asbury

Date: 11/24/2018 5:02:00 PM

More stunning imagery...well done, friend Poet!

Sherry Asbury

Date: 11/21/2018 8:29:00 PM

I love haiku and this is a splendid example. So much imagery in so few words

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/12/2018 5:26:00 PM

Your striking imagery ignites dramatic beauty in my mind. A spectacular haiku, Harry. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/10/2018 6:29:00 PM

Oh yes, and I recall it. Such a brilliant winning gem it is.

Robert Bellam

Date: 11/10/2018 9:59:00 AM

OOPS! Thought of water not season...Sorry

Robert Bellam

Date: 11/10/2018 9:58:00 AM

This beautiful imagery I can see the mountain, the stream and the Sunrise. Thanks

Aqua Marine

Date: 11/6/2018 9:56:00 PM

"a sliver of spring..." I love these words, provoking thoughts of the warmth still to arrive. A perfect haiku, Harry, congratulations on your placement!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/6/2018 6:16:00 PM

Hello Harry, I like this poem. You paint a lovely scene with your words. Have a nice evening my friend.

Anil Deo

Date: 11/4/2018 1:19:00 PM

I get the picture. Then, again "sun" always get my heart to also think about the "Son" & Jesus' Light. John 9 (JESUS: "i am the light of the world ..." shalom

Warren Doll

Date: 10/31/2018 8:59:00 AM

Harry, congratulations on your win. It is well deserved for this brilliant haiku. A fav for me ~Warren

Constance La France

Date: 10/30/2018 3:04:00 PM

Harry, congratulations on your win in my contest ~

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/29/2018 1:39:00 PM

What a lovely haiku, Harry! Congratulations on your win in Dear Heart's contest. She has another similar one going now. Bet it fills fast. I didn't even see this contest before it closed. Hope yo are doing well, my friend. Love, Carolyn