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Valley of Mist

a sliver of spring
the sun peeps over the crag...
shadows melt away

	© Harry J Horsman 2018

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Sherry Asbury

November 24, 2018 at 5:02 PM

More stunning imagery...well done, friend Poet!

Sherry Asbury

November 21, 2018 at 8:29 PM

I love haiku and this is a splendid example. So much imagery in so few words

Susan Ashley

November 12, 2018 at 5:26 PM

Your striking imagery ignites dramatic beauty in my mind. A spectacular haiku, Harry. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

November 10, 2018 at 6:29 PM

Oh yes, and I recall it. Such a brilliant winning gem it is.

Robert Bellam

November 10, 2018 at 9:59 AM

OOPS! Thought of water not season...Sorry

Robert Bellam

November 10, 2018 at 9:58 AM

This beautiful imagery I can see the mountain, the stream and the Sunrise. Thanks

Aqua Marine

November 6, 2018 at 9:56 PM

"a sliver of spring..." I love these words, provoking thoughts of the warmth still to arrive. A perfect haiku, Harry, congratulations on your placement!

Darlene De Beaulieu

November 6, 2018 at 6:16 PM

Hello Harry, I like this poem. You paint a lovely scene with your words. Have a nice evening my friend.

Anil Deo

November 4, 2018 at 1:19 PM

I get the picture. Then, again "sun" always get my heart to also think about the "Son" & Jesus' Light. John 9 (JESUS: "i am the light of the world ..." shalom

Warren Doll

October 31, 2018 at 8:59 AM

Harry, congratulations on your win. It is well deserved for this brilliant haiku. A fav for me ~Warren

Constance La France

October 30, 2018 at 3:04 PM

Harry, congratulations on your win in my contest ~

Carolyn Devonshire

October 29, 2018 at 1:39 PM

What a lovely haiku, Harry! Congratulations on your win in Dear Heart's contest. She has another similar one going now. Bet it fills fast. I didn't even see this contest before it closed. Hope yo are doing well, my friend. Love, Carolyn