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Guess Who

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Guess Who

~It's a Beautiful Day~

Under every star, 
A smile waltz-like no other
Once a simple cherry blossom girl, 
enjoying puppets and lullabies.
Sitting in front of the screen
Anxiously waiting for him to come in
through the front door, whistling a song, 
trading a suit jacket, for a zippered sweater;
made with love. ---My day just got better---

   ***It's a beautiful day***
In a charming little town square 
A servant, serving a friendly atmosphere
Welcome to the land of make-believe, 
where all my friends are real.
Here comes the speedy delivery 
Mr. McFeely and his letters.
Prancing puppet skin in love with
Beautiful Lady Aberlin.
Henrietta, a mighty and feisty pussycat
My favorite strings are the king and queen
Before the show ends, Trolley's a friend
tooting around from make-believe to reality.
   ***It's was a beautiful day***
Oh the innocence of my childhood, 
       My neighborhood is gone

By: PD

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 9/17/2016 11:01:00 PM
My grand kids always thought him a bit scary. Couldn't get them to watch for some reason. Oh well, my time was Howdy Doody. Now that was quality entertainment:) Great read! Thank you.
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Date: 9/10/2016 12:23:00 PM
Oh I forget which of my children watched Mr Rogers. What I remember most are his sweaters, and one program... "There's never any trouble here in Bubble Land, Bubble Land, Bubble land". Perhaps that neighbourhood is gone for you, but you've grown up and found better.:) Keep well, Mikki
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Date: 7/23/2016 5:49:00 PM
Mr. Roger's Neighborhood! Great Read!
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Date: 7/17/2016 10:35:00 AM
like this one Linda, has a nice flow
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Date: 5/30/2016 5:43:00 AM
really nice poem Linda, I enjoyed reading this.
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Date: 5/26/2016 12:44:00 PM
Its been a while Linda. I hope you are good. Lovely poem you've got here
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Date: 5/22/2016 4:24:00 AM
The imagery of this piece kaleidoscopal Feel seems so familiar...nicely done
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Date: 5/13/2016 11:44:00 AM
You speak not only for yourself but for our whole generation. Love this! Way to go, PD!
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Date: 5/10/2016 10:59:00 PM
Wow! That was simply an amazing read and i beg the difference in regards to your neighborhood being gone, it's gone and most certainly not your childhood, ...your poetry immortalized them for all times
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Date: 5/2/2016 1:23:00 AM
Yes indeed We all love to remember the care free days of our childhood. Good job my friend. Nice imagery. God Bless, JB
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Date: 4/23/2016 10:48:00 AM
soupmail!!
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Date: 4/22/2016 10:36:00 AM
Beautiful description...!
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Date: 4/1/2016 12:12:00 PM
Description is very nice.I feel ur presence in every sentence. Hugs......MKD
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Date: 3/27/2016 1:19:00 AM
What a nice picture of a childhood fond memories. Considering your childhood and how you relate on it in a positive way. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/26/2016 4:39:00 PM
Hi Linda, memories always caress the mind, some of joy, some of sorrow. All make us a part of who we are. So much can last forever in our memory. I did Love this look into your childhood. As always Linda, it is well written and shows such joy and Love. Your pen does run gold. Your words seem to flow so easily. This is a definite seven and into my faves. Two of the four homes i have lived in in my life are gone now. I have my memories though....MIKE.
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Date: 3/26/2016 11:49:00 AM
Great write as always,,just wanted to stop by and say hi stranger, Justin
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Date: 3/24/2016 12:11:00 PM
A well-written piece. Keep it up, Linda. :)
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Date: 3/15/2016 8:53:00 AM
Linda, very nicely penned, with many wonderful lines and phrases, I am loving this 7 ~
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Date: 3/6/2016 8:47:00 PM
Nice :) And true - we grow up, the neighborhood's, etc innocence is gone. But the day is still wonderful ))
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Date: 2/29/2016 9:32:00 AM
Hello, my loving sis! Oh,I think I've really missed this one. I'm glad I've found it tonight to read. This is so amazing my dearest sis. I can imagine a simple blossom girl with her smile. Precious mem'ries we truly rekindle in our lives bringing us back to those beautiful days! Tiptop write as always. Thanks a lot for sharing! Btw, got few time at soup today. How are you my sis? Hope you're doing well and so with your family! Hugs and kisses! love lots forever sis-BFF, GL
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Date: 2/27/2016 5:57:00 PM
Dear Linda Mr. Rogers right, lol a memory from my childhood too, sis by the way in your last comment you finished by saying that I was one of your fav's which is awesome, but I'm not a friend I'M your sister of the heart, and poetry soul sisters, thanks for your comment though I loved it and this piece is really special, by the way which is your favorite muppet charator, sorry about the spelling but I'm really tired today, cheri
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Date: 2/25/2016 7:48:00 AM
Waw! it is just awesome...enjoyed every bit of the word in it Big ups.
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Date: 2/24/2016 2:30:00 PM
I love this - did not see the sad and cryptic end coming so great dramatics, too ... CayCay
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Date: 2/23/2016 3:54:00 PM
Profound! I loved it.
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Date: 2/18/2016 10:21:00 AM
Nostalgia is a worthy poetic theme and in some ways one that suffuses the entirety of 19th century romantic poetry. Yet the optimism in your words implies that the goodness of the past can be recaptured because of its simplicity and honesty.
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