Growing Pains

Listen to me, Darling.
Let a smile replace that frown.
I will lengthen all your shirtsleeves,
I will let your pant legs down.

You complain that you feel awkward
And you don't know what to do,
With arms that are all elbows
That are sprouting out from you.

I have something here to show you
In my winter garden room.
Have you ever seen such beauty
As this Amaryillis bloom?

It was nothing much to look at
Just a month or so ago,
Until I gave it light and water
And it started in to grow.

I could see it add the inches
Every day before my eyes
And it gave no indication
Of its wonderful surprise.

If I hadn't known the end result,
I might have thrown it out
In those days when it was only
A fast growing, lengthy sprout.

You are going through a growth spurt
That will only last a while.
The charming woman you're unveiling
Will bring back your lovely smile.

Just know that as you're changing and
Evolving hour by hour,
You are growing into beauty
Like my amaryllis flower.l

By: Joyce  won 7th place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 10:27 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's Anything Goes Contest One Joyce. Love,Carol
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January 10, 2010 at 11:51 PM
Wonderful creative and beautiful writing here, Joyce. Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest and thank you for sharing. Love, Lainie
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January 3, 2010 at 5:51 PM
hey, Joyce, I just saw you were in the top ten with this. WAY to GO. It's really nice. You are awesome. Andrea
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January 3, 2010 at 7:55 AM
Congrats on your success in Constance's contest Joyce.Rgds Brian
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December 4, 2009 at 10:34 AM
I do not canvas for many friendships, but I sue for yours ... I am sure you are legacy in the canons of our craft, please accept my encouragement on the beauty of your write, you have set a standard I will always want to find. One love
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November 28, 2009 at 7:50 PM
Very nice poem...Enjoyed reading tonight...Marty
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November 28, 2009 at 1:17 PM
such a beautiful talk between mom and daughter.Loving ,caressing lines smooth out the edges of a necessary awkward age. Thank you for sharing that tender time, Joyce that you've expressed so well in this lovely poem.
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November 28, 2009 at 12:20 PM
sweet poem! jimbo
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November 28, 2009 at 12:11 PM
Beautifully written for that young lady who is at the akward stage of her life. I know when she read it that her self-image improved immediately. Keep your magical and creative pen flowing. Sara
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