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Growing Pains

Listen to me, Darling. Let a smile replace that frown. I will lengthen all your shirtsleeves, I will let your pant legs down. You complain that you feel awkward And you don't know what to do, With arms that are all elbows That are sprouting out from you. I have something here to show you In my winter garden room. Have you ever seen such beauty As this Amaryillis bloom? It was nothing much to look at Just a month or so ago, Until I gave it light and water And it started in to grow. I could see it add the inches Every day before my eyes And it gave no indication Of its wonderful surprise. If I hadn't known the end result, I might have thrown it out In those days when it was only A fast growing, lengthy sprout. You are going through a growth spurt That will only last a while. The charming woman you're unveiling Will bring back your lovely smile. Just know that as you're changing and Evolving hour by hour, You are growing into beauty Like my amaryllis flower.l By: Joyce won 7th place

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Date: 1/11/2010 10:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's Anything Goes Contest One Joyce. Love,Carol
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Date: 1/10/2010 11:51:00 PM
Wonderful creative and beautiful writing here, Joyce. Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest and thank you for sharing. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/3/2010 5:51:00 PM
hey, Joyce, I just saw you were in the top ten with this. WAY to GO. It's really nice. You are awesome. Andrea
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Date: 1/3/2010 7:55:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Constance's contest Joyce.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/4/2009 10:34:00 AM
I do not canvas for many friendships, but I sue for yours ... I am sure you are legacy in the canons of our craft, please accept my encouragement on the beauty of your write, you have set a standard I will always want to find. One love
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Date: 11/28/2009 7:50:00 PM
Very nice poem...Enjoyed reading tonight...Marty
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Date: 11/28/2009 1:17:00 PM
such a beautiful talk between mom and daughter.Loving ,caressing lines smooth out the edges of a necessary awkward age. Thank you for sharing that tender time, Joyce that you've expressed so well in this lovely poem.
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Date: 11/28/2009 12:20:00 PM
sweet poem! jimbo
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Date: 11/28/2009 12:11:00 PM
Beautifully written for that young lady who is at the akward stage of her life. I know when she read it that her self-image improved immediately. Keep your magical and creative pen flowing. Sara
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