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My sir name is not Grimm and this is not a fairytale. On nights when wolves howl and the moon is pale, I become another being when my arms begin to flail. I wrestle with the urge to stop, but always to no avail. I bit into a poisoned apple and thought I would die. Peering back at me in the mirror, I saw an evil eye. I shrieked in fear and doubled over. I began to cry. What nightmare is this and pray tell me, who am I? Last month I pricked my finger and flew off in a rage. My beastly hands caught a rabbit and put it in a cage. What madness grips me and sends me off in rampage? I want out of this cruel story. Hurry and turn the page! Recently I was transformed into a creature, rather droll. I remember in a book, that under a bridge lived a troll, and when people stumbled upon him, while on a stroll, He made them pay but I eat them. I'm out of control. It seems I'm walking through some creepy forest tonight. Stars watch me through dead branches. Do they have sight? Furry hands once again and I'm growing to a great height. Damned full moon is haunting me. I cannot escape its light.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/26/2016 6:43:00 PM
this message of yours is getting me trapped in thoughts...well written poem...and the imagery got me checking if the window is locked, wait! who's banging at the door?!
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Date: 1/26/2016 6:51:00 PM
You must open the door to find out...but be sure you have a baseball bat in hand. MERCI! for getting caught up in this one, Sage.
Date: 1/25/2016 5:17:00 PM
Excellent, Lin! Very humorous and creepy!!
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Date: 1/25/2016 8:09:00 PM
Thank you very much, Thomas. I'm happy that you found it both funny and creepy.
Date: 1/25/2016 8:29:00 AM
It is truly wonderful when one can still pretend and use their imagination for something so creative. I love the theme and the write,Lin.
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Date: 1/25/2016 8:39:00 AM
Ah, but Daniel, are you sure this is my imagination? Come and try to cross my bridge when the next full moon rises....lol thanks for your wonderful comments ;)

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