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Greenville, Mississippi - 1957

A dirty old sidewalk runs in front of grandma's house with bumps and cracks from the roots of ancient white-oak Armed with cane poles and sack lunches crickets and freshly dug earth worms we meander down to the levee barefoot in careless summers One low spot beneath a straggly Chinaberry filled with pitch-black delta dirt washed in by summer rains We shuffle through and dig down cooling our toes

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Date: 12/5/2016 12:47:00 AM
Beautiful, the images in my mind of where you are and were. Congratulations :)
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Date: 12/4/2016 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations Tim. :)
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Date: 12/4/2016 10:27:00 AM
Congratulations :)
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Date: 5/26/2015 3:46:00 PM
Let's enjoy them together
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 5/26/2015 4:25:00 PM
I did a re-write of this named 'I Recall'
Date: 7/27/2013 5:44:00 AM
Tim a perfect summer day. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/25/2013 9:55:00 PM
hello, TIM the poem is hot and Awesome... congrats with your summer time poem...love Linda
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Date: 7/25/2013 12:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Tim xx
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Date: 7/24/2013 1:46:00 PM
so easy to picture, especially the last two lines. congratulations!
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Date: 7/24/2013 1:31:00 PM
Hi Tim, congratulations :-), a lovely gift of a poem. Thank you for the support my contest. Stop by and enjoy my blog: (A Lavender Day-- summer contest) winners. Have yourself an awesome day. LUV ~SKAT
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Date: 2/15/2013 11:06:00 PM
oh my this is one of the best yet. also I see it won in one of Constance's contests long ago. Those were the days, right ? when Constance was inspiring us with her beautiful contests. I saw you have many senryu back here in these first pages as well. Gotta get to those one day. Luv,Andrea
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Date: 10/23/2009 4:54:00 AM
Congratulations, Tim, on your success in Constance’s “A Walk to Remember” contest with this nostalgic poem. It's easy to see why you placed. Very nice. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 10/18/2009 12:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest! ~Trudy~
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Date: 10/17/2009 2:43:00 AM
Congrats on your success in the contest Tim.Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/16/2009 8:44:00 PM
A MASTERPIECE!!!! . Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/16/2009 5:36:00 PM
I loved this one first time I read it, and still a winner in my book! ~Congratulations Tim!! ~Love, Carrie
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Date: 10/16/2009 3:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest Tim. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/16/2009 3:07:00 PM
Hi Tim, congrats on your win! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 10/16/2009 2:45:00 PM
Tim, congratulations on your success in the contest...Raul
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Date: 10/11/2009 1:42:00 PM
Delightful Choka Tim >> James
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Date: 10/8/2009 7:12:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest
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Date: 10/5/2009 8:52:00 AM
I am sure I missed so many amazing poems this past weekend. I enjoyed reading yours today Tim. Thank you for sharing it. Wishing you the best in Constance's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2009 4:19:00 AM
Good luck in the contest. Sounds like children having fun. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/4/2009 5:16:00 PM
Great submission to the contest, Tim! There are sidewalks in my neighborhood like this. And, to answer your question, yes...I am irresistably drawn to the karaoke mic many a Saturday night! :o)
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Date: 10/4/2009 4:54:00 PM
Carolyn - Greenville, MS...on the mighty Mississippi River; my birthplace and where I spent many wonderful childhood summers! As always thanks for your kind and encouraging comments my friend - Tim
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Date: 10/4/2009 2:57:00 PM
yes I remember loving MUD! I have never seen New Oreleans or Loisiana I'd love to visit the bayou and be at a cajun party! Light & Love
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