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Green To Gold

Trees shed cloaks of green To assume their robes of gold Another summer gone Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved First Place in SKAT's "Summer Is Over" Contest - September 2010

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Wilma Neels

Date: 9/10/2010 4:07:00 AM

Bob congratulations on your 1st place in Irma's contest.. Hope you will have a stunning day ahead :) Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/9/2010 11:18:00 AM

Congratulations Bob on your win in S K A T *S contest "Summer Is over". Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 9/2/2010 11:08:00 AM

Autumn described at it's best Robert, awesome Haiku. Congrats on your fine win >> James

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/2/2010 8:21:00 AM

beautiful, congrats on your first place win in the contest

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/2/2010 4:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Robert in S K A T *s contest "Summer Is Over". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/1/2010 9:35:00 PM

Great win, Robert. congratulations!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/1/2010 7:28:00 PM

Wonderful entry Bob and congratulations on your big first place. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/1/2010 6:36:00 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win for this wonderful entry, Bob

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/1/2010 5:40:00 PM

A great win for a great poet. Congrats on 1st place win! Michael

Skat A

Date: 9/1/2010 5:05:00 PM

BOB, I love the top line out of all Haiku Lines. LOL, I was eager to find out who had #1. It does not surprise me. Once again Congratulations, and thanks for the wonderful entry. Had fun reading all the amazing Summer Haiku*luv~SKAT

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/1/2010 5:01:00 PM

YEAH and HOORAY Bob on your first place win in the Summer Haiku contest.. awesome and enjoy my friend.. with luv..

Ralph Taylor

Date: 8/16/2010 6:53:00 PM

Awesome, Bob. Great write. Ralph

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2010 5:54:00 PM

Good LUCK !! in the contest ,,sorry for the ((k,,,..p.d.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2010 5:53:00 PM

Oh! Bob h. i am so missing you guy's,, loved your haiku. Good luc in the contest,..p.d.

Marycile Beer

Date: 8/15/2010 1:51:00 PM

So True, Bob. Son in law says an early winter coming. If it will get rid of these grasshoppers I'll go for it. It is funny how they are intermitted across the country. Thank goodness. They cleaned out Shirlee's garden and ate the onions clear down inside. May the fall be as beautiful as your poem. God Bless, Cile

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/14/2010 12:11:00 AM

Good entry, Robert, and please tell me where cellphones is> I typed it in and put your name by it too. Nothing came up. I wil check the first few pages of your poetry now and then I'll need to get to bed! Later! andrea

Skat A

Date: 8/13/2010 7:39:00 PM

LoVE IT BoB H.*luv~SKAT

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/13/2010 4:28:00 PM

A terrific haiku, Bob! Nice use of personification for the trees. Creative and perfectly rhythmic. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/13/2010 9:19:00 AM

Another day of reading the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I enjoyed reading yours today Robert. Have a wonderful weekend. I need to see if I can find some inspiration this weekend. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/13/2010 2:49:00 AM

Bob, another stunning write, all the best for Irma's contest - bb Wilma

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/12/2010 2:36:00 PM

Very good one! good luck my friend.. Michael

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/12/2010 2:23:00 PM

nice one, good luck in the contest