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Green Eyes

Green eyes Crying tears of pain Not those physical But those of lost love Deep inside Love continues to beat For a hopeless soul Who has gone And left Leaving one disenchanted Disillusioned And desperate for The lost love Loving the illusion Of a person That would return The love back But now is no longer Participating in the exchange Of each other’s love It’s one sided now And painful Heartache rules one’s life And nothing will separate One’s love For the other Ever
Russell Sivey Entrant into Sandy Ivy D's "Go Green - what green means to you? (new or old poem)" contest 2/22/2013

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Date: 3/14/2013 5:08:00 PM
Great job Russell...congratulations!!!!! Donna
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Date: 3/13/2013 7:16:00 PM
Congrats, Russ. Outstanding. Ralph
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Date: 3/13/2013 6:12:00 PM
Russell, Congratulations with your wonderful winning poem in Sandy's contest~ always*LINDA
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Date: 3/13/2013 11:22:00 AM
great poem my friend Russell, so emotional...I like it. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Maria
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Date: 3/13/2013 10:10:00 AM
Congrad's on your win in the Green contest, may Spring come early for you. Light & Love
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Date: 3/12/2013 9:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement with this neatly constructed gem! RAY
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Date: 2/22/2013 5:39:00 PM
oh, that heart ache. WEll expressed, Russell.
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Date: 2/22/2013 5:19:00 PM
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Date: 2/22/2013 1:45:00 PM
Dear Russell, we all have been through similar situations. The heart though will keep beating no matter if it suffers or if it is joyous! Well written filled with love and anticipation. Green eyes or blue the same the pain! Great work!
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Date: 2/21/2013 10:06:00 PM
A beautiful poem about green eyes. A lost love is one that you never forget. Thanks for sharing and have a good night. lucilla
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Date: 2/21/2013 7:56:00 PM
Russell, my green eyes and those words defintely sum me up. You must have read all my work by now. ....Seren
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