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Gray Skies Crying

Fields get gleaned at summer's end when day shrinks and night pervades. And canopies start shedding before Winter's cold invades. Leaves blush scarlet and crimson, responding to frost's first kiss. And breaths of foggy air morph into swirls; breezes dismiss. Rutting sets the bucks on edge, rivals clashing head-to-head. Yet their pungent odor lures compliant does; to be bred. The ground crackles, treading on the newly dead and dying. And thin, skeletal branches, reach up to gray skies crying. Raindrops morph into snowflakes, forming frozen puffs of cloud. And Autumn's stripped of color, buried under Winter's shroud.

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Date: 2/22/2023 7:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being on Brian's winners' list. Way to go. Sara
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/22/2023 7:54:00 AM
Thanks, Sara, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/14/2018 2:44:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/14/2018 3:19:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your encouragement and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/5/2015 8:13:00 PM
marvelous write--do check out mines and tell my what you think
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/6/2015 8:32:00 AM
Thanks, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 11/5/2015 6:44:00 PM
wonderful I love it--Please do check out mines and tell me what you think
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/6/2015 8:32:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 11/5/2015 3:23:00 PM
Fantastic, Emile! You've portrayed autumn's death and the birth of Winter in splendid fashion. A definite 7 and a fav.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/5/2015 4:45:00 PM
Thanks Lin, I appreciate your encouraging visits. Emile.

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