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Gravity

surreal images enchanted visions in space that pull at our lives

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/9/2014 8:07:00 PM
Great Haiku! grats on your placement :)
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Date: 7/9/2014 3:06:00 AM
Nicely done. Congrats.
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Date: 7/8/2014 11:20:00 PM
good haiku...PD
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Date: 7/8/2014 8:36:00 PM
Congrats on a beautiful win, Barbara my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/8/2014 5:41:00 PM
I like this one, Barbara. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/8/2014 3:47:00 PM
Nice one, Barbara, Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/8/2014 10:36:00 AM
Fine take on the contest Barbara, nicely written, James.....
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Date: 7/8/2014 10:20:00 AM
This is a lovely haiku with a great final line! Congratulations, Barbara! // paul
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Date: 7/8/2014 12:42:00 AM
Very lovely n true Barbara! They really hv a magnetic pull ! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 7/8/2014 12:28:00 AM
Very fascinating take on the picture's theme, Barbara, congrats on the win
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Date: 7/7/2014 9:14:00 PM
Barbara, Congratulations, Thank you for the awesome haiku. Enjoy my -Most Recent Blog Post if you like. ""Super Blind - Super Quick..."" Love SKAT
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Date: 5/27/2014 3:25:00 PM
My Dearest Most Only BeLOVEd Barbara Jean, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Superb Haiku! Great to read YOU again .Soup Mail Call LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOURS Eternal...Harry
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Date: 5/24/2014 11:47:00 PM
I love the line "pull at our lives" so much like gravity itself.
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