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Celestial, this orb

Paradise amidst such dark

Her eon voices

Celestial, this orb Paradise amidst such dark Her eon voices .

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2014 5:50:00 PM

James, thank you for supporting my comment :)

John Michaels

Date: 7/10/2014 5:15:00 AM

Nice write! Congrats on your win!

James Fraser
Date: 7/10/2014 4:01:00 PM

Thank you kindly John, very much appreciated, James :)

Tim Smith

Date: 7/9/2014 7:41:00 PM

The voices that go on..wonderful James...congrats

James Fraser
Date: 7/10/2014 3:57:00 PM

Yes indeed they do Tim, many thanks, James :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/9/2014 7:39:00 PM

You have a great mind James I am loving seeing you on all the winners lists, what a way to rock :)

James Fraser
Date: 7/10/2014 3:48:00 PM

Big thanks Casarah. I'm enjoying being back, James :) xx

Mark J. Halliday

Date: 7/9/2014 3:02:00 AM

Eon voices. Hmmmm. Something more to ponder. Congrats.

James Fraser
Date: 7/10/2014 3:08:00 PM

And pondering we will go, but one day, all will be revealed. Many thanks Mark, James :)

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/8/2014 8:21:00 PM

congrats on a great win, James my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene

James Fraser
Date: 7/10/2014 3:01:00 PM

Much thanks Arlene, and much appreciated, James :)

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/8/2014 5:25:00 PM

I really like this one, James. Congratulations on your high placement.

James Fraser
Date: 7/10/2014 2:51:00 PM

Many thanks Faye, it was an enjoyable poem to piece together, James :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2014 3:38:00 PM

this is one I find very appealing, James. Congrats on a well deserved win.

James Fraser
Date: 7/10/2014 2:38:00 PM

Thank you Andrea, this little piece was a pleasure to write, James :)

Paul Callus

Date: 7/8/2014 9:34:00 AM

An excellent creation! Well done, James; this sure merits the high placing it received. // paul

James Fraser
Date: 7/8/2014 10:01:00 AM

Thank you kindly Paul for your always kind comments, James......

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/8/2014 4:33:00 AM

Love your two last lines speaks so much!!! Big congratulations! GBU ... Olive Eloisa

James Fraser
Date: 7/8/2014 9:52:00 AM

Thank you Olive, your comments always make me smile, James :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/8/2014 2:07:00 AM

Fabulous write James! Congrats on huge win!

James Fraser
Date: 7/8/2014 9:34:00 AM

It's always a joy to see what one writes enjoyed by others, it does make me smile. Thank you Upma, James :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/8/2014 12:14:00 AM

Very creative and interesting write, James, congrats on the win

James Fraser
Date: 7/8/2014 9:28:00 AM

Thank you kindly Dr. Ram - much appreciated, James.....

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/8/2014 12:08:00 AM

Hi James, just following-up from my comments below confirming that you have the gift, my friend - congratulations on a great, well-deserved win! BRAVO

James Fraser
Date: 7/8/2014 9:22:00 AM

Thank you Pandita for your always kind words, James..........

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2014 9:30:00 PM

Congratulations... James....Linda

James Fraser
Date: 7/8/2014 9:18:00 AM

Many thanks Linda :)

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2014 9:11:00 PM

James, I was in awessss.... love it..... Congratulations, Thank you for the awesome haiku. Enjoy my -Most Recent Blog Post if you like. ""Super Blind - Super Quick..."" Love SKAT

James Fraser
Date: 7/8/2014 9:11:00 AM

Thanks kindly SKAT, a short piece I so loved writing, James :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/25/2014 9:05:00 PM

Another awesome write, James - way better than mine:-). Warmest regards.

James Fraser
Date: 6/26/2014 3:49:00 PM

Space, another of my loves, and so much to learn about there it'll take man many Eons if we're to learn and progress, and to behave. Thank you kindly once again for your kind words, James :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/22/2014 6:11:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative work..It has been awhile since you were here..Thanks for the visits..I appreciate you saying that my dad would like my Limerick...Sara

James Fraser
Date: 5/23/2014 12:07:00 PM

Your welcome Sara :)

Robert Pettit

Date: 5/22/2014 5:37:00 AM

Looks like a strong competitor. Good luck with your entry.

James Fraser
Date: 5/23/2014 12:08:00 PM

Thanks kindly Robert :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/21/2014 7:55:00 PM

James, a wonderful haiku. I love the eon voices, a vast from long ago. Wishing you luck...Linda

James Fraser
Date: 5/23/2014 12:08:00 PM

Many thanks Linda ;-)