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Graveyard Caste

Come quickly, let us tempt the fading mists we ghostly shadows of a graveyard tryst ashamed - not of our deed - but of our sin fulfillment of the dream of now, not then. And so among the silent headstone hush we lie beneath the tangled thorny brush endure the sting of freshly bloodied lust defile the silence of a graveyard trust. Thus do we share our love with those long past a challenge to the lies of ancient caste to walk away and hear the tombstones sing as winds of change the frozen church bells ring. We will embrace the now, we two, as one while walking through the graveyards others shun. ©11/13/2019 I Want To Fall In Love With A Sonnet Poetry Contest

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Date: 11/13/2019 6:00:00 PM
G'day John … nicely written sonnet, that has a kind of spooky feel about it, but a really good tale - Lindsay
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John Lawless
Date: 11/25/2019 8:04:00 AM
Yeah Lindsay, grave yards and tombstones will do that. thanks for stopping to read and comment
Date: 11/13/2019 10:21:00 AM
This is a masterful write John, love your word selection and phraseology, this one should do well in the contest! Winters breath has inspired some poems today I see!
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John Lawless
Date: 11/25/2019 8:02:00 AM
John, thanks for stopping to read and comment. Sorry for the long delay in responding, had a knee surgery so I was out of the loop for a bit.
Date: 11/13/2019 9:03:00 AM
This was really well written. You have captured your theme perfectly in this smooth reading sonnet of sensuous moving shadows among the dead. Best wishes in the contest.
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John Lawless
Date: 11/13/2019 9:52:00 AM
Thanks Chris...the first hard cold weather hit this morning and I was just gazing out the window....and well you know....
Date: 11/13/2019 8:04:00 AM
Wow, this is so good. You captured the perfect mood for this contest. Well done, I can feel the hairs on the back of my neck rise.
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John Lawless
Date: 11/13/2019 8:56:00 AM
Thank you Richard. I wasn't sure if i'd wandered too far off the reservation. always nice to hear from you

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