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Graveside Service - a Shadorma

Forsaken, weather beaten sign, your tombstone. Nameless soul, the Savior knows who you are. May you rest in peace.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2017 10:08:00 AM

this is so lovely, Tim. I Hope you are enjoying the new year, my friend. Congrats on your win here.

Sonia Walker

Date: 1/13/2017 8:13:00 PM

Tim, congratulations on your winning poem. I learned something new today about Shadorma poetry. ~ Sonia

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/13/2017 8:04:00 PM

A very comforting and meaningful thought, Tim. Congrats on your fine placement! Sandra

Agnes Krampe

Date: 1/13/2017 7:23:00 PM

Thanks for introducing me to the form of shadorma, which I did not know before. Congrats on your placement with this beautiful poem.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/13/2017 6:49:00 PM

A 7 for this hauntingly moving poem. Congrats on your win! Janice

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/1/2012 10:32:00 AM

Tim, congratulations in Kim's contest. Nice "Shadorma Styling Poem" enjoyed stopping by today. :-) always PD

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/30/2012 10:23:00 AM

Congrats on your win with this lovely write. BG

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2012 6:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Kim's "Shadorma Style" contest Tim. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2012 1:56:00 PM

Sad to see an unmarked grave..Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2012 8:19:00 PM

I remember this one very well and it is right where I predicted it ought to be, In FIRST place. Congrats.

Joseph May

Date: 8/28/2012 9:16:00 AM

congrats on your win Tim....great poem

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/28/2012 6:17:00 AM

Nice remembrance to those who have passed. thanks Tim for this respectful poem. Lee

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/27/2012 7:55:00 PM

Tim, this really tugged my heart-strings. An excellent write! Thank you for supporting my contest! Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2012 9:26:00 PM

WOW. this one deserves a BIG win, and thanks for letting me know you had studied out the form, constanza.

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/21/2012 7:57:00 AM

actually this is superb Tim, a caring and thoughtful tribute. to those whom once like us now graced this place called earth. and like the last poem i read of yours, brings to mind one of my mine in the same idiom. try my 'Desecration of a grave'

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/15/2012 2:34:00 PM

weather -beaten sign, nameless soul... your words speak volumes, tim... priceless!..:) huggs and congrats on your recent win in brian's contest...

David Williams

Date: 8/15/2012 6:59:00 AM

Tim, very well done, I like this a lot, the first line immediately gets you thinking the soul is forsaken, then your mind flips to all of the nameless souls, and the last two just glide you through it, excellent..David

Joseph May

Date: 8/15/2012 6:07:00 AM

great write Tim.......Joseph