Notes About The Poem

 

Gratitude

Gratitude

We pass by homeless on the street They make me grateful for the roof above my head Metatarsalgia in my feet makes me wince How lucky I am that I can still walk Although my feet hurt I’m thankful the tumors in them are benign How grateful I am not to worry how my money will be spent Because I have none Sure, my cholesterol is nearly 400 But I’m thankful that my heart still beats Age has blurred my vision Yet it’s a blessing to have eyes that still see most things And ears to hear Though people have to speak louder to me now How grateful I am to have a voice When there is someone who cares to listen A sense of humor is one of God’s greatest gifts Let's all show our appreciation
*August 31, 2020 For Francine’s “Attitude of Gratitude” contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/9/2020 12:11:00 PM
Yes, such truth here, hon - love this uplifting write x
Login to Reply
Date: 10/5/2020 8:08:00 PM
This is the ultimate 'silver lining' poem and I love it. God bless you for your inspiring attitude of gratitude, Carolyn. Big congrats for your podium win. Hugs ~ John
Login to Reply
Date: 10/5/2020 6:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your poem. I am also very greatfull for my voice. X
Login to Reply
Date: 10/4/2020 7:40:00 PM
congrats darling Carolyn on your second place win in my contest , thank you for entering
Login to Reply
Devonshire Avatar
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/9/2020 1:29:00 PM
What a nice surprise, Francine! Thank you.
Date: 9/29/2020 8:50:00 AM
I really love this write! We should all feel as grateful as you do. Much love, Angie
Login to Reply
Date: 9/22/2020 6:48:00 AM
Very much so...love it!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/4/2020 1:48:00 PM
Age robs us of many things, but grumbling will get us nowhere; let's make the most of what we still have! Your meaningful poem shows the way forward! Hugs // paul
Login to Reply
Date: 9/2/2020 8:48:00 AM
God has given us all certain charms,he gave us very importantly the gift of logic and made each one of us unique - Glory to God. Lovely poem Carolyn - good luck in the contest. Love and hugs, Jennifer
Login to Reply
Date: 9/1/2020 8:12:00 AM
This one is going into my faves Carolyn. Wonderful. I have problems with my feet too but and grateful I can still walk and even run a little. My vision isn't that good either but I can still see. We all get old and succumb to aches and pans but we can still get around. Thank God for small miracles. God Bless, JB
Login to Reply
Devonshire Avatar
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 9/1/2020 2:18:00 PM
Thank you, Judy. I think we just become more grateful for the little things as we get older.
Date: 9/1/2020 7:29:00 AM
You certainly are a tonic with your humourous outlook Carolyn:-) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 9/1/2020 5:21:00 AM
WOW! This is a stunning portrait my friend, on how to be grateful despite all the normal worries of life. Many can relate to your echoes on aging and those who are less fortunate. Superb sentiments, Carolyn: ..How grateful I am to have a voice When there is someone who cares to listen...true for us all. I am saving this in my FAVES.
Login to Reply
Devonshire Avatar
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 9/1/2020 2:30:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay. Getting older is easier if you have a sense of humor.
Date: 8/31/2020 5:44:00 PM
I enjoyed this write immensely, Carolyn. You have a wonderful way with words! A top winner for sure - Bob
Login to Reply
Devonshire Avatar
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/31/2020 10:58:00 PM
Thanks for reading, Bob.
Date: 8/31/2020 5:37:00 PM
Great poem of gratitude, Carolyn. So Nice to connect again. Elaine
Login to Reply
Devonshire Avatar
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 9/1/2020 2:44:00 PM
It's great to see you hear, Lainy. I'll check to see if you've posted new poetry.
Date: 8/31/2020 4:35:00 PM
we are surely blessed, carolyn...i enjoyed this heartfelt piece...careful with that cholesterol... huggs
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter