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Gratitude

Gratitude

We pass by homeless on the street They make me grateful for the roof above my head Metatarsalgia in my feet makes me wince How lucky I am that I can still walk Although my feet hurt I’m thankful the tumors in them are benign How grateful I am not to worry how my money will be spent Because I have none Sure, my cholesterol is nearly 400 But I’m thankful that my heart still beats Age has blurred my vision Yet it’s a blessing to have eyes that still see most things And ears to hear Though people have to speak louder to me now How grateful I am to have a voice When there is someone who cares to listen A sense of humor is one of God’s greatest gifts Let's all show our appreciation
*August 31, 2020 For Francine’s “Attitude of Gratitude” contest
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Horne Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 12:11 PM
Yes, such truth here, hon - love this uplifting write x
Watt Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 8:08 PM
This is the ultimate 'silver lining' poem and I love it. God bless you for your inspiring attitude of gratitude, Carolyn. Big congrats for your podium win. Hugs ~ John
Chamberlain Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 6:46 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your poem. I am also very greatfull for my voice. X
Roberts Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 7:40 PM
congrats darling Carolyn on your second place win in my contest , thank you for entering
Devonshire Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 1:29 PM
What a nice surprise, Francine! Thank you.
Crabtree Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 8:50 AM
I really love this write! We should all feel as grateful as you do. Much love, Angie
Goff Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 6:48 AM
Very much so...love it!
Callus Avatar
September 4, 2020 at 1:48 PM
Age robs us of many things, but grumbling will get us nowhere; let's make the most of what we still have! Your meaningful poem shows the way forward! Hugs // paul
Proxenos Avatar
September 2, 2020 at 8:48 AM
God has given us all certain charms,he gave us very importantly the gift of logic and made each one of us unique - Glory to God. Lovely poem Carolyn - good luck in the contest. Love and hugs, Jennifer
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September 1, 2020 at 8:12 AM
This one is going into my faves Carolyn. Wonderful. I have problems with my feet too but and grateful I can still walk and even run a little. My vision isn't that good either but I can still see. We all get old and succumb to aches and pans but we can still get around. Thank God for small miracles. God Bless, JB
Devonshire Avatar
September 1, 2020 at 2:18 PM
Thank you, Judy. I think we just become more grateful for the little things as we get older.
Allison Avatar
September 1, 2020 at 7:29 AM
You certainly are a tonic with your humourous outlook Carolyn:-) hugs jan xx
Pandit Avatar
September 1, 2020 at 5:21 AM
WOW! This is a stunning portrait my friend, on how to be grateful despite all the normal worries of life. Many can relate to your echoes on aging and those who are less fortunate. Superb sentiments, Carolyn: ..How grateful I am to have a voice When there is someone who cares to listen...true for us all. I am saving this in my FAVES.
Devonshire Avatar
September 1, 2020 at 2:30 PM
Thank you, Vijay. Getting older is easier if you have a sense of humor.
Hinshaw Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 5:44 PM
I enjoyed this write immensely, Carolyn. You have a wonderful way with words! A top winner for sure - Bob
Devonshire Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 10:58 PM
Thanks for reading, Bob.
George   Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 5:37 PM
Great poem of gratitude, Carolyn. So Nice to connect again. Elaine
Devonshire Avatar
September 1, 2020 at 2:44 PM
It's great to see you hear, Lainy. I'll check to see if you've posted new poetry.
Onclaud Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 4:35 PM
we are surely blessed, carolyn...i enjoyed this heartfelt piece...careful with that cholesterol... huggs
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