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"Granny let's go" With gusto said "Below . . . basement" "Gran first placement" His statement rang Payment. . . safety He said bravely . . . "hastily come, Matey" if . . . scream
Fill in the ellips line three...for line six...his line seven...I'll line eight...you

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Date: 3/16/2016 8:01:00 AM
Hi Sara, I see congratulations are also in order for you. I like the feel of yours.
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Date: 3/15/2016 5:53:00 PM
Sara, Congrats on your win in "Marugu MO's contest." Wuv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/13/2016 7:22:00 PM
Congrats in the contest, Sara. Hope you are doing well this weekend.
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Date: 3/11/2016 8:58:00 AM
Hi Sara, Enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.
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Date: 3/9/2016 8:47:00 PM
Poor granny going down first as the guinea pig ... This was a well written than-bauk, and I liked what you did with the ellipses to add tension. For me it even made sense without the added explanation at the end. I enjoyed this challenge because it gets everyone to try out a poetry form that most people try to avoid!
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Date: 3/3/2016 5:00:00 PM
Sara, this is a great write, I am loving it 7 and the contest was so confusing, I am not even sure I did it right ~
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Date: 2/29/2016 3:53:00 PM
Sara, this is nice, but maybe I misunderstood this one? I thought this form was only three syllables per line. I am really confused, guess I will wait to see how this one is judged!!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/29/2016 4:12:00 PM
Andrea, I thought it was four syllables per line..I tried to find something on the internet about it but did not really find anything so I was left out in the dark..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Date: 2/25/2016 9:00:00 AM
Good one, Sara...I've never written in this form. It's interesting. Hope all is well.
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Date: 2/25/2016 9:07:00 AM
It was hard trying to say what I wanted to say with only four syllable and it had to rhyme on certain syllables..So I used the ellipsis to show you need to fill in the blanks with certain words to make it make sense..Not sure that it makes sense still..Sara
Date: 2/25/2016 7:30:00 AM
- Brave ..... those little wishes :) - Great ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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